Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

Serenity 'Close the Door and Open A Window Gorramit!'

Monday, September 21, 2009

How to deal with the present when the crew is still fighting (in their own unique ways) with the past.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2960    RATING: 8.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Episode seven.

INT. INARA’S SHUTTLE - NIGHT

INARA is tending to something inside her shuttle when behind her MAL appears at the doorway in a very smart suit.

He waits silently, for her to realise he is there, this way he gets to watch her for a moment. When she realises he is there INARA turns around and looks at him but says nothing.

Her face says she is still very angry with him for what happened on Sihnon.

MAL goes to enter but realises he has barged in again and takes a step back to smugly knock on the door.

MAL: You can’t hate me too much.

He gestures to the necklace she is wearing, it’s the one he bought for her. She holds it in her hand against her neck.

INARA: What do you want?

MAL holds out his hand for her to take.

INT. INARA’S SHUTTLE – CUT to later

INARA and MAL are dancing with each other. They are dancing formally and not intimately at all. There is no music or noise. As they spin and become consumed by each other’s presence they dance closer and closer.

MAL: Shoulda been me at your fancy ball.

INARA: Yes, it should have.

MAL takes INARA’S chin in his hands and after a very suspenseful full of tension moment, they’re heads fall into each other.

Just before they kiss INARA’S eyes flutter open in her bed where she has been sleeping.

IT WAS A DREAM!

INARA is facing away from the cockpit of her shuttle and is annoyed she woke up when she did. She tries to fall back asleep squeezing her eyes shut a couple of times.

When it doesn’t work she throws her covers off of her, turns over and stands up out of her bed.

She is met with a Reaver staring right at her face, it growls and she screams and the Reaver violently slams her across her bed. As she lands and the Reaver looks as though it could jump over the bed to attack her again.

INT. RIVER’S DORM – NIGHT

RIVER wakes with another gasp. She doesn’t cry out this time though, she keeps it quiet.

IT WAS A DREAM INSIDE A DREAM!

EXT. PLANET WOODS - DAY

On a planet and through some

Comments
Monday, 21 September 2009 15:09
Really enjoyed reading this series. Think I've run across this particular one where Zoe says goodbye to Wash and imaginary/ghost Wash before, but this one in particular hurts in all the right ways. Wash as a ghost/figment of Zoe's pain was an excellent depiction here.

The humour in these was very good, very firefly-esque, and I also like how not only was Derria a unique character adding her own brand of strangeness to the ship, but also the way that the connection of the name really only hit me until JUST before you explained it.

Nicely done.
Tuesday, 23 March 2010 18:35
Ah Mal, you fool. If you wanted Inara to see you as a legitimate option, maybe you shouldn't have spent all that time lording things over her head and being smug. Kinda difficult to trust that much avowed respect you claim to have for her - or is that only when she does things your way? I'm not surprised she clings to her job right now, even if it's fake. I also liked her take-down of Sheydra. Right now she seems to feel like she's surrounded by people she can no longer trust.

Very engaging series, all around. Zoe's part especially. Looking forward to more.

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