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The DUPLICITY Series: 70. "Closure"

Wednesday, July 8, 2009

"Badger discovers something he didn't expect. Gabriel decides it is time to disappear. Meanwhile Inara springs a surprise on Serenity's crew just before the other shoe drops for the Captain."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4417    RATING: 10.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "CLOSURE"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: Zoe/Wash. Kaylee/Simon. Mal/Inara.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: Sequel to "LEGACY". **CONCLUSION**

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: None. All Firefly stories archived at Fireflyfans.net

SUMMARY: "Badger discovers something he didn't expect.

Gabriel decides it is time to disappear. Meanwhile Inara springs

her surprise on Serenity's crew just before the other shoe drops

for the Captain."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"CLOSURE"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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A long time ago this had been a lush green land. Rich grasslands, a few rolling hills, valleys, rivers and somesuch. A thriving rural community made up of ranches and farms with towns dotted wherever there was access to clean water and convenient distance between homesteads. At War's End the Alliance - in a fit of spite - had razed the buildings, trees and crops to the ground. Many folk going up like Roman candles when they retreated to their own houses, thinking bricks and mortar would save them where burning woods wouldn't. The ash had been greasy and more than ankle deep. Not nothing worth saving when the hot dust and thick palls of smoke had settled. The Alliance were nothing if not thorough, reducing the whole world to a ball of smoking ash and ruin. Not no one left alive on it, those captured placed in some distant *jianyu* simply for being in the wrong place at the wrong time. When they were eventually released they found themselves exiled from their homeworld

Badger stared, eyes wide and trying to comprehend. On the journey he had scoured the cortex for every last fact he could find on Shadow and what he saw and read had sickened him. All of a su

Comments
Wednesday, 08 July 2009 11:41
Glad to see they all got a happy ending finally!
Wednesday, 08 July 2009 14:00
Ooh, super happy ending!

After all the pain the captain's been through, it's good to see the universe make up with him and give his crew a break.
Wednesday, 08 July 2009 15:37
WONDERFUL! And I'm not just saying that. I loved the last section with Mal, Zoe, and River. I could see it, feel it, and even taste the air in Serenity. I bow before a master storyteller.

Oh and as for Badger...man still needs to die. LOL!
Wednesday, 08 July 2009 19:16
Thanks for all the feedback, so happy you enjoyed the story. Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"
Thursday, 23 July 2009 22:30
Beautifully done! This story has been fascinating from beginning to end....though the end is really a new beginning, isn't it? The very best kind! :)
Sunday, 01 May 2011 06:26
wow, just, wow... that was an excellent, entertaining and captivating series, AliD...you continue to amaze us all with your intricate and engrossing story lines...thank you
Saturday, 03 December 2011 18:29
So glad you enjoyed the story slumming and as you so rightly say, every ending is but a new beginning. Where will it lead? Thank you for your comments also MalsDoxy, it faintly amazes me every time anyone stays right until the end of one of my series stories - some do get a mite long but you have to do the stories justice not cut them off without a proper ending. All comments greatly appreciated, Ali D :~)
"You can't take the sky from me!"

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