Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Devoid of Suspicion

Sunday, June 28, 2009

Kaylee and Simon's relationship has been discovered by Mal, in a rather embarrassing way. k/s Fluff, some smut, some humor, and a smidgen of drama. Please, please, please.... review!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2975    RATING: 2.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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This takes place post BDM.

Disclaimer: Joss Whedon is a god. I am just a lowly priest.

Simon and Kaylee slipped into his bunk as secretively as they could, not even walking to their destination together, to avoid suspicion. They have been avoiding each other on the ship anytime a crew member was around to avoid hints of their changed relationship from being dropped. It was so nerve-wracking, when all they wanted to do is hold each other, kiss each other, and be in each other’s company all of the time. They knew if they lingered too long, or spoke too much, someone in the crew would figure it out, which will have disastrous results. Zoe was still in mourning for Wash, while Kaylee knew that Mal would not abide in a shipboard romances. Jayne would just tease Simon endlessly, and River, well, River definitely knew already.

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As soon as the two made it to Simon’s bunk, they could not keep their hands off of each other. Simon pulled Kaylee into a deep, passionate kiss, exploring her body with his gently hands. He pulled each bit of her clothing off, never breaking his kiss.

Kaylee broke the kiss and started to unbutton his shirt, kissing his chest every inch of the way. When she got to his pants, she smirked and slipped them down, kissing just inside of his thigh, letting out a small giggle when she saw how aroused he was. She sipped is boxers off and licked just the tip of him, which twitched in response to touch.

“You don’t have to do this” he practically sighed out, loving what she was doing.

She stood up, looking straight into his eyes and said, with a smile on her face, “I just want to thank you for your attention last night, ‘sides, I wanna.” She slinked back down his body, onto her knees.

Putting the sensitive tip to her moist, gentle lips, she kissed it slowly, wrapping her lips around him. With one hand, she cupped his balls, massaging gently. As she slipped his length into her mouth, softly running he tongue on the underside, she let out a contented moan, s

Comments
HISBAOBEI
Monday, 29 June 2009 04:03
I like that the couple's intention to hide their affair was the exact thing that got them caught by the Captain.
I just finished your other piece. On the heels of that, I think my expectations were a little higher. This was a bit more sophmoric.
That being said, I definately think you should keep writing. Maybe consider picking up where "Needed Rest" left off? ... And get that beta. Mal's got Zoe, yes?
HISBAOBEI
Monday, 29 June 2009 04:09
OK, I'm telling you to get a beta and I spelled sophomore incorrectly. Oy!
Tuesday, 30 June 2009 19:52
thanks for the review, I actually wrote this one about a year before my other one, I just uploaded it after for some reason, so yeah, its childish. Thanks again.
MUSEFAN
Wednesday, 01 July 2009 22:41
dont you think its a bit, over the top for a fan fic? its a bit far tbh we dont need firefly porn :S
Thursday, 02 July 2009 01:54
I hate to break it to you, but this is not even the most graphic firefly smut out there. I mean, there is actually Simon/River stuff out there!

It says smut in the description, so what did you really expect?
MUSEFAN
Thursday, 02 July 2009 07:57
yeh but, i just didnt expect it that graphic on a site that anyone of any age can get on
Thursday, 02 July 2009 15:43
If you were offended, sorry. Just for future reference, this site is filled with smutty stories, so DON'T CLICK ON THEM IF YOU SEE SMUT IN THE DESCRIPTION!
MUSEFAN
Thursday, 02 July 2009 16:48
Fair play, just my first time reading a smutty story on this website:P
bit shocked haha sorry!

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