Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Bring Me To Life - Chapter 4

Sunday, May 24, 2009

First of all, yes, it's Mal/River so if the notion of that upsets you at all, don't bother clicking. Simon and Kaylee have a discussion over Mal and River's conversation while River confronts Mal in his bunk. Post-BDM, M/R, VERY NC-17

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Later that night, Simon and Kaylee were relaxing together in Kaylee’s bunk before heading off to bed. Simon was sitting on Kaylee’s bed and brushing her hair while she sat on the floor in front of him, looking the picture of serene and peaceful. Simon however merely looked distracted and kept staring at the walls with a faraway look on his face. After a bit of time, Kaylee pulled her head away from Simon’s brush and turned to look at her lover.

“Is there something bothering you Simon?”

“Huh? What? Oh, no, nothing’s bothering me bao bei. Why would you think that?”

“Well it’s just that you been combing the same patch of hair for the past couple minutes without moving at all,” said Kaylee, her eyes narrowing.

“Oh, was I? Sorry, I didn’t notice,” said Simon, still staring at the wall.

“Simon, my eyes are down here.”

“Huh?”

Kaylee groaned and got to her feet, standing right in front of Simon and took his face between both her hands, forcing his gaze at her.

“Okay, look, I can tell somethin’s botherin you so ya might as well just come right out and say it ‘less you want to be sleeping alone tonight.”

“Honestly Kaylee, what do you think is on my mind right now? Obviously my mind is on what happened between River and the captain earlier today.” Simon said bitterly, forcing Kaylee’s hands off his face. He stood up himself and started pacing back and forth around the room, hand plastered to his forehead as he tried to make sense of what happened.

“I just don’t get it at all,” he said finally. “I mean, what does River see in him? The man is a bitter, sarcastic, cocky, self-absorbed thief.”

“Whoa, hey, that wasn’t at all nice mister,” Kaylee said icily, standing in Simon’s path with her arms folded over her chest. Simon, all too used to pissing off Kaylee by saying things without thinking, quickly tried to rebound.

“Okay, I didn’t mean that exactly like it sounded. It’s just that I’m not entirely sure that the captain would be a suitable mate for River.”

“Oh, and why exactl

Comments
Friday, 29 May 2009 02:56
Well hope you keep posting more.
Saturday, 30 May 2009 20:45
very nice. you have a way with words, and I agree that i hope you keep posting more. I do think that your characterization of Mal might have been a little off. I think he needs to be more gruff, but with a softer side...or maybe that's what your doing but we need just a bit more of the insides of Mal's head. i dunno, either way, that's just some constructive feedback, and again can't wait to read more from you
Tuesday, 11 August 2009 03:28
More, now I'm begging for more!!!!

I agree, Mal needs to be a bit more gruff and I don't think he'd be quite as afraid of Simon as one would think.

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