Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

She's near me

Thursday, March 5, 2009

This is a short poem-ish fanfic i wrote today. The idea just kinda came to me. This is Mal's POV on the moment he and Inara give in. If you like this read the parallel fic to this "I'm near him" :)

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She’s near me now

It ain’t right

I mean I’ve always wanted it

But she deserves more respect than that

Granted I haven’t always shown it

Or said sorry when I didn’t

But I don’t have any patience for her occupation

And she knows that

She’s batted it in my face

Constantly reminding me of what I can’t have

I hate her for it, I can’t possibly forgiver her for it

The way I’ve been spun about

The tension, it’s pulling and seething in my head,

Because she’s near me

And this time

I might just give in

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Friday, 06 March 2009 01:24
That's pretty good

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