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River's Run - Part 2

Thursday, January 8, 2009

River battles the Alliance to save her life while forces in other parts of the galaxy move toward her, some to help her, others to kill her.

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River’s Run –Part 2

“We need a mechanic,” said Wash to his wife as they inspected the outside of Serenity II at the shipyard on Ariel. It was the morning after their conversation with Simon and they decided to get out and get their new purchase ready for flight and business.

“We’ll put the word out,” Zoe said as she looked in disappointment at obvious signs of rust she hadn’t noticed when they had bought the old Firefly the day before. “She also needs a good cleaning.”

“Time for that later,” said a voice and Zoe’s face changed from a scowl to a broad grin as Wash and she turned in somewhat mild, but not total, disbelief.

“Sir,” Zoe said with barely suppressed joy.

“Captain Washburne, I’m looking for a berth,” said Mal with a hint of mirth. “I got lots of experience and don’t mind taking orders.”

“Who do you think you’re kidding?” said Wash with a snort. “Say, Zoe, lets give him a trial run, see how long it takes before he pulls a mutiny and takes over your command. I bet it’s only a day.”

“I’d say an hour,” Jayne added as he joined them from the cargo bay. “Couldn’t stay away, huh?”

“Got the itch again,” Mal confessed. “Being around Alliance types made my skin crawl.”

“What’d Inara say to all this?” Zoe asked and Mal looked down and away and Zoe knew she didn’t know yet. “So, when you plan on telling her?”

“She’s due on Shadow in a few days. Hoping to have some things resolved before then. If it takes longer, might have to tell a few fibs.”

“What things “resolved”?” Wash asked in worry.

“River,” Mal said and then he started looking over the ship as Wash gave Zoe a look that said “what the hell are we doing” and she shot him her “shut up for now’ look.

“Sir, the ship is yours. Your money paid for it,” Zoe stated and Jayne let out a groan and Wash wished he hadn’t gotten up this morning.

“Thanks, Zoe. I know I promised you your own ship and this is your ship. But…”

“Here is comes,” said Wash with a groan.

“Gorramnit,” Jayne grumbled.

Zoe shot them both evil looks. “

Comments
Thursday, 08 January 2009 11:44
Mal is quite the coward in this story, isn't he? Why can't he tell Inara the truth instead of leading her on? Where has his spine gone?? Oy oy oy.


You've been very busy writing lately. Good job! There are too few plotty series in the Blue Sun Room. :)
Thursday, 08 January 2009 12:52
Well, I don't think Mal's spine has anything to do with it and calling him a coward is just plain ignorance. He's not ready to tell Inara yet, hoping he can resolve the issue before it comes to that.
Thursday, 08 January 2009 16:04
Hmm. But what's there to be ready for? If he's not ready to settle, or unsure about it, he should let her know ASAP, right, instead of leading her on while she severs her old ties? Is he scared of her reaction?


But I don't want to be focusing only on my one nitpick. :) I like the introduction of Inara's husband, and of course, River!
DARBYMONSTER
Friday, 09 January 2009 02:55
Nice to see some more fanfic from you. You've been very busy writing lately and we are grateful.

Seems neither Mal nor Inara are quite ready to settle down, more logistics than emotion, but neither are telling the other the whole story. Not a good way to start a commitment.

And speaking of commitments, why on earth is Kaylee as a married woman called Mrs. Frye? If she kept her maiden name, she might be Ms. Frye, but if she's a Mrs, she'd be Mrs. Tam. That's something that's always struck me as a little off.
Friday, 09 January 2009 14:31
My wife kept her last name and also called herself "Mrs.". I don't think there is a real rule about Ms. or Mrs. Is there? Maybe Kaylee is just waiting for the real wedding ceremony. Hint, hint. Thanks for the comments and yeah, I was away for a while, had lots of other things to do, like real writing jobs that pay money, keeping me busy. I write English education books here in Korea and it's almost a full time gig. Happy New Year everyone.
Sunday, 11 January 2009 05:44
Great to see more of your writing and your story. Loved that Janice is helping River after seeing more of the truth. Glad that Mal is coming to help River, but seems that Kaylee is right - he feels like he doesn't deserve happiness. Looking forward to more!
Friday, 30 January 2009 14:12
I'm thinking that Paulo Chase is not going to be happy with anything other than what he wants so even having the bride price repaid with a handsome interest he won't let go, especially if as he suspects Inara has a chance of happiness with a man she actually loves. The little rat will need close watching. Loved River in this but looks like our resident genius is going to have her hands more than full with former academy proteges lining up to kill or capture her. As for Mal he isn't a coward, if he was he wouldn't be risking his own happiness with Inara to try to save River. He is a man torn by conflicting loyalties not one running away from them. Ali D :~)
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