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The Return Home - Part 25

Monday, November 10, 2008

The crew is scattered across the galaxy as new twists in their lives send them on different paths.

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The Return Home – Part 25

Kaylee’s emotions were on a roller coaster, going from defiance of Admiral Byrd, to sheer horror and terror as the Admiral ordered Major Grace to shoot Simon, to elation as her Capt’n suddenly appeared seemingly out of nowhere with his gun in his hand and was confronting Major Grace.

Other emotions were present, tension most of all and as Mal’s gun came out and was pointed at Grace several Alliance weapons turned from Jonathan and pointed at Mal. But Mal’s gaze or concentration never wavered as he pointed his pistol at Grace who had his pistol pointed at Simon and Kaylee.

“Major, I ain’t gonna ask twice,” Mal send in his don’t mess with me or face the consequences tone of voice.

“Shoot this son-of-a-bitch!” Admiral Byrd ordered his soldiers and just as all hell seem to break loose a voice of reason came like a soothing balm to all. Kaylee was surprised to find it came from an Alliance officer.

“Stop! Nobody move!” said a man standing next to Mal in the fore hall doorway to the dining room. He was tall and well built and had grey hair and the markings of a colonel on his uniform. His voice was commanding and even Admiral Byrd looked at him and hesitated. Byrd knew him, all the soldiers knew him. He was Colonel Justin Powers and he had been a hero in the war.

“Everyone just calm down,” Powers said. “Men, lower your weapons.”

Immediately the soldiers lowered their weapons, included Major Grace, who let out a long sigh and seemed about to collapse. Kaylee hugged Simon tighter and just kept staring at Mal, whose pistol was still up and whose gaze didn’t leave Grace.

“Colonel, you better have a good explanation for this,” said Byrd in a commanding tone.

“I could ask the same thing, Admiral,” Powers replied and Byrd just glared at him. “Here are my orders.”

Powers stepped into the room and handed over a piece of paper which Byrd snatched away and quickly scanned. His angry turned to surprise and then indignation.

“This is an outrage!”

“When I report you wer

Comments
Tuesday, 11 November 2008 01:02
Thanks to all who patiently waited while I finished this story. It lasted much longer than I intended it to and took twists and tunrs I didn't expect. I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I did writing it. I just couldn't find a resolution where all ended happily so I've set myself up for more adventures with "River's Run". No telling when it will be up but I've plotted a lot of it and the first chapter is being written. Thanks again for your support.
Tuesday, 11 November 2008 01:42
Liked the way you wrapped this up but still hate it that Mal had to sell his ship to the gorram Alliance. I don't trust Shin and when you had Patterson being taken to Farscape Moon? I laughed out loud, half expecting you to have him share a cell with John Crichton! Poor River, a wanted criminal and murderer and everyone having to adjust to changes all round. Did smile at Zoe buying a Firefly and calling her Serenity but baffled at the dealer checking to make sure there wasn't another Firefly registered with that name before giving her a new transponder for the ship. So what happened to the transponder for the original Serenity? I'm sure the Alliance would have picked that up right quick if it didn't have one. - Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 11 November 2008 01:53
Farscape was a name that just popped into my head. I've heard about the show but I've never seen it, but I thought it would be a nice sci-fi reference. Serenity never had a transponder, since they were introduced while they were on Earth. Remember when they appeared out of the wormhole in front of the cruiser and they had no transponder? The transponders they "bought" were first for a ship named Calypso and then for Constellation. The dealer was checking so he could use the name "Serenity' on the forms. And do you really think Mal is going to retire and not get his ship back? Mmmmm, we'll just have to wait and see. Thanks for all your comments, good and bad.

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