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The Return Home - Part 7

Thursday, June 12, 2008

Alliance missiles and gunships home in on Inara's shuttle as this time escape seems impossible.

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The Return Home – Part 7

Wash and Kaylee sat on the bridge of Serenity, watching with disbelief as an Alliance missile streaked away from a pursuing gunship straight for Inara’s shuttle. The little ship banked and turned through the lower atmosphere of Persephone, amidst hills and tress, and still the missile chased it, gaining on it with impeding doom. Wash pushed the VTOL’s for full power and willed Serenity toward the shuttle.

“Come on!” he yelled as he twisted Serenity to follow. Zoe was on that shuttle and his brain screamed in despair as he watched the distance closing between the shuttle and certain death for his wife and shipmates

“It’s got a heat lock!” Kaylee yelled from the co-pilot’s seat. She had just arrived after telling Simon they had incoming wounded. Simon had raced to the infirmary to get things ready and she had come on the bridge just in time to hear Wash shout to Inara that a missile was chasing them. She immediately jumped into the co-pilot’s seat and took up a scan of the sensor boards.

“Not for long!” Wash grunted as he set Serenity hard over to the right on a parallel course with and behind the shuttle and then the missile caught the larger heat bloom from Serenity and switched from the shuttle to the larger ship.

“Now what do we do?” Kaylee said to Wash in a frightened voice as the missile lock tone beeped from the control panel,

Wash racked his brain. Missile is a heat seeker, needs heat, only heat is Serenity and the shuttle, need to provide…another source of heat! “Kaylee, do we have any flares?”

“Some….oh no…that’s crazy…I…I understand. I’ll use shuttle two's door!” Kaylee quickly said as she grasped Wash’s plan and then she grabbed the intercom mic. “Simon! Meet me at shuttle two’s entrance!”

She raced from the bridge to a locker under the stairs to the bridge. It was small and had some odds and ends Kaylee kept, including a flare gun with four rotating chambers she had. It was something she had picked up just in case they ever got stranded somewhere and ne

Comments
Thursday, 12 June 2008 15:59
i've left off commenting on this coz, truthfully - you make me kinda nervous, but this has been a really exciting annd finely written tale.
Thursday, 12 June 2008 23:34
Okay, I'm curious. Mal didn't want River telling Badger anything or letting him in on the fact she's a Reader so how come she talks to him of things she shouldn't know? Being a Reader shouldn't she know that Mal doesn't want her saying anything? I did smile at the little note for Mal hidden inside Jayne's envelope as if Book wanted to make sure the Captain didn't read his note before Jayne got his. I am worried about Kaylee's pa, that evil Cutter needs putting down pronto - just hope Book manages to take him out and rescue Mr Frye in time. Ali D :~)
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Friday, 13 June 2008 01:12
Yeah, how to handle River in situations like that is tricky. She says things she shouldn't and she should know what Mal wants but she also isn't quite stable as we all know. And then again, how well can she read minds is always a matter of conjecture. I've writen her as more stable than other fanfic writers but she still says things and does things that could cause trouble. Of course, what more trouble can they get into even if Badger figures out what River is? They already got Alliance after them, Kaylee's father is a prisoner, they got their minds set on going to Miranda...hmmmm we'll just have to wait for the next part...a return to Serenity Valley! There, a minor spoiler. Thanks for all comments by the way. Things might be slower in the next few weeks since I'm on vacation soon and will be traveling. Stay shiny!

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