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Out to the black Chapter 5

Friday, June 6, 2008

After the gunfight, the law shows up.

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Out to the black Chapter 5

Disclaimer: Joss, Fox, Universal Own em’. I’m just playing. No money being made.

This is my first Fan Fic ever. Constructive reviews are shiny.

This fic takes place two years after Serenity (BDM) and has the established couples of Simon/Kaylee and Mal/Inara along with a Jayne/River friendship.

After the gunfight, the law shows up.

Out to the black

Chapter Five –Aftermath

Jayne, Zoë and Mal jumped out of the Mule as soon as it reached the end of Serenity’s ramp, weapons at the ready. Mal spoke first while surveying the carnage.

“River, what in the hell happened?”

“This one,” River said, pointing to the moaning man lying on the ramp, his ruined knee bleeding heavily.” Was after Jayne, we tried to convince him that Jayne wasn’t here. Didn’t believe us. Tried to board the ship.”

“And these other five men?”

“His cronies” River replied with a smile.

Jayne strode up to the man on the deck, recognition on his face. “Marco, you liou coe shway duh biao-tze huh hoe-tze fuh ur-tze!”

“Huh?” Mal replied.

“Member when I joined up with’s ya’” This is the piece of luh-suh I was runnin’ with that day.”

“I seem’s to remember you shootin’ him in the leg that day too…”

“Same leg” Jayne laughed.

“This all your work there Tross’?” Mal asked the diminutive psychic.

“I got three, Allan shot those two” River said pointing to the two dead men with the tightly grouped double taps to the chest.

“I’m ‘pressed… tight groups, right in tha’ ticker. Old timer’s got some skills” Jayne complemented.

Mal strode over to the older man sitting on the edge of the ramp, head hung low looking at his feet. Mal noticed Allan’s hands were shaking a bit.

“You all right there Allan?”

“Peachy”

“You sure? I mean, not all folks handle killin all that…”

“Not the first time I’ve ever shot and killed someone Mal.” Allan said. Cutting the captain off.

“Huh?”

“Long story.” Allan took a deep breath,” Give me a couple of minutes to get the adrenalin out

Comments
Friday, 06 June 2008 02:07
That outcome seems unusually lucky for our BDH's!
Sunday, 08 June 2008 13:22
Mal complaining about Serenity becoming a love boat really made me laugh... we all know he didn't mean it after all ;) So did the part when Zoe asks what is a French fry *lol* I'm glad the crew found Jacob, it's always nice to meet another browncoat as Mal said!

Keep flying ;)

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