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The Return Home - Part 1

Saturday, May 17, 2008

Sequel to "The Return". Serenity returns to its quadrant of the verse to find that things are not quite the same as when they left.

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The Return Home – Part 1

Having just been sucked clear across the galaxy through Gregori Kovalev’s wormhole, Serenity and its crew were confronted by two startling facts. Four years of their lives had somehow disappeared while they traveled to Earth and back again and right now a very large and ominous looking Alliance cruiser was filling the cockpit windows, asking for Serenity to identify itself, and launching small fighters towards her. This might have been just another routine inspection for any other Firefly class transport, but Serenity had four things on board that if found might just put everyone in deep, deep trouble, the kind of trouble that gets you killed.

First, they had the Kovalev Drive, hooked up to Serenity’s engine, which was responsible for this mess in the first place. Next, all the gold and jewelry and stuff they had stolen from Earth, which might take some explaining, especially since some of the gold bars were mark “Bank of Australia”. Of course, there was the continuing problem of the Tam siblings, wanted fugitives that they were. And worst of all, a shipment of arms. It was the cargo of arms that was the worst because shipping weapons other than those needed for defensive purposes was a death penalty offense under Alliance law.

Everyone was on the bridge except Kaylee and they all just stared out the windows, too shocked by this sudden change in events to speak for a moment. Simon put a protective arm around River as their worst fears about the Alliance were suddenly coming true. Then Kaylee’s voice came through the intercom from the engine room, breaking the silence.

“Bridge, what’s going on? We home?”

Mal snapped out of it, grab the intercom mic. “Kaylee, get ready for full burn.”

“But Capt’n. What’s happening? We still….”

“No time to explain, Kaylee. Get ready!” Mal shouted as he looked at his pilot next.

“Wash, plot us a course out of here.”

“Where to? I mean, I don’t even know where we are right now!”

“Suss it out and then get us anywhere!” Mal shouted,

Comments
Saturday, 17 May 2008 16:19
Very interesting AU version of the verse and a great scifi story to boot! Love your characters in this and very interested to see what comes next.
Saturday, 17 May 2008 23:38
Oooh, I had to grin when Serenity shot away from the Alliance vessel but I did curse when Mal answered their wave and told him the name of his ship. Now it will be flagged on high priority or similar with the Alliance no doubt worrying like crazy that it is the latest in a new line of ships in the Independents' renewed fight. Mal should either have jettisoned then blown up the new drive or had Kaylee take them through another jump so they could end up a few months or years on. I think this is going to get quite convoluted. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 18 May 2008 13:28
You made some good points but I thought of them and went the other way. I thought about Mal giving a false name for the ship, then I remembered its painted on the side in big letters in Chinese and English. He was trying to buy time for Wash to set the nav computer so Mal figured he better tell a little bit of truth or the cruiser might have opened fire. Also, Kaylee couldn't have made another jump right away since she was hurt, what she did with the engine was quite by accident, and the engine room is still full of radiation.
Monday, 19 May 2008 12:43
hey this is cool, I'm gonna go back and read others now. Aww i ain't here enough to catch all the good stuff.
Monday, 19 May 2008 15:07
this was very exciting:)

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