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A New 'Verse 1-Changes

Friday, May 16, 2008

With the Miranda message out in the open and the Alliance shaken to its core, it is a new day in the verse, one full of opurtunites for Serenity. But can River handle her newfound responsibility as pilot?
My first serial fic that involves the crew. I hope you enjoy it!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2956    RATING: 8.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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A New ‘Verse-I-Changes

The times they are a changin’. That had never been truer, thought Captain Malcolm Reynolds as he sat in the pilot’s seat, staring out into the vastness of space. Since the message about Miranda had spread the times had begun to change. Some of the change was slower than could be imagined, some was faster than anyone supposed was possible. Other changes were barely imperceptible across the Verse but made a difference to millions. And there were millions of other changes, small changes that only affected a few. Like the death of Hoban Washburn, the most fearless pilot this side of Shinon. His death, the removal of his conscious being from the ‘Verse, was an event that only directly affected a handful of people. But those handful were not just any random handful of space wanderin’ folk, not simply part of the lost multitude who roved the blackness searching for something…more. Or for nothing at all. This handful were the very ones who set all these changes in motion. Along the way they had lost friends, lovers, confidants, people they could trust. But they were still here. And they were still flying.

Their actions had changed the face of the Verse, in all probability forever. When the wave about Miranda had gone out, the government’s reaction was panicked, to say the least. One councillor denied that such an event ever happened, a second blamed the incident on independent terrorists, still another came forward and apologized for the entire incident. It had been hidden from the people ‘for their own safety’ and ‘the greater well-being of the peoples of the Allied Planets’ he had said. The peoples reaction was sudden and often violent. There were riots in the streets, burning buildings, screaming, howling crowds, pulsing with anger and betrayal. More than once the police and soldiers sent in to quell these riots simply refused to subdue the citizens. There was still order, for the riots were not an everyday occurrence, but slowly everything outside the Central Planets was slipping from Alli

Comments
Friday, 16 May 2008 02:25
Very good start, looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Loved the homage to Marv.
Friday, 16 May 2008 02:46
Sounds good. very interesting! Ready for more too.
XYNK
Friday, 16 May 2008 04:09
i like it but a couple suggestions dont take it too hard...
k the "Gorram it river" bit mel only talks like that when he's hurt he would actually say god dammit... unless he were bumped around abit. and the other thing is that the little jump thing that the firefly does isin't like a hyperdrive it's just a little speed boost things don't normally have much trouble following them. not meaning to burst you bubble. i do hope there's more thow.
XYNK
Friday, 16 May 2008 06:56
k i take it back he does say gorram... i don't remember him saying it unless he's hurt in the series.
Friday, 16 May 2008 09:01
Oooh, good start. And just their luck for River to have an 'episode' at the very moment they need her sanity the most. I was sad though that much was made of Wash's loss but not of Book. I miss them both. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 16 May 2008 20:42
The beginning was very densely packed with info and I sort of skimmed it at first. After I read the action..which I liked a lot...I went back and reread the first part again...I know the desire to provide all sorts of details that run thru my head...I just think some people might skip it entirely. Which would be a shame since it conveys a lot great stuff. Maybe next time a bit more action in the beginning and spread the info out a tad more. I look forward to the next installment.

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