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The Return - Part 8

Sunday, April 13, 2008

Mal strikes a deal with Commander Jackson but its not a deal everyone likes as the crew finds themselves once again in a familiar situation.

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The Return – Part 8

Serenity was in an underground hanger just below the surface of the moon, where some of the survivors of Earth’s once teeming masses remained. From all contact so far, Serenity’s crew had learned that these people were low on supplies and in desperate need of their ship, so desperate that they had captured Mal, Jayne, Simon and Kaylee in a bid to gain control of Serenity. Prepared for a confrontation with Commander Jackson in order to negotiate for the release of her crewmates, Zoe was stunned and overjoyed to find Mal at Serenity’s cargo bay door. Now he was talking about making a deal with these people.

“What kind of deal, sir?” Zoe asked the question on all their minds.

“Not the best I ever made but it will do for now,” Mal began. “I suspect they are listening to every word we’re saying so best keep any plans you all have to yourselves for now and listen for a spell.”

No one said a word so Mal took it they understood what he said. “Good. These people are running out of food and what they grow here won’t last them forever and it’s just a basic fair of fruits and vegetables and some grains I’m guessing. This Jackson fellow sees himself as the new leader of humanity so wants to check on Earth for survivors and see if a return to Earth and a new beginning are possible. Barring that, they want to come with us to our neck of the verse.”

“So it’s possible to send us home? He wasn’t lying about that?” Zoe asked.

“Don’t know and can’t tell. They got a scientist here who says he created this wormhole and can do it again. All I got is his word for that.”

“And the fact that we are here,” Book added.

“Then there’s that,” Mal said, guessing the Shepherd was no longer believing his God brought them here and it wasn’t a point he felt the need to argue about, not now anyways.

“So here’s the deal. Jackson already told you he wants some of his people and some of our people to take Serenity to Earth. In no way does he get control of Serenity. He was a bit not too pleased with that p

Comments
Monday, 14 April 2008 22:18
Oooh, good story. I like Mal putting Chin in his place and the grins on the faces of the other people from the Moon that came with him. I am worried about the crew left on the Moon. Wouldn't put it past Jackson to lock them all up, agreement or no agreement. I hope while Mal and co are snooping around poor old Earth that they find some fuel for Serenity otherwise this'll be a really short trip. As for Kaylee thinking there is a conspiracy trying to keep her and Simon apart, silly thing, with everything going on the last thing she and Simon need is to get themselves distracted with sex. Plenty of time (hopefully) to rut like rabbits when they are all safe and free again. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 15 April 2008 01:16
Thanks for all the comments Amdobell and all others who took the time to do so. It makes one feel good while writing to know people out there want to read your stuff. This series started off with the thought - "What happened on Earth in the last five hundred years?" - and just snowballed from there. I've got 12 parts planned out but it might be a few more than that. I'm trying to write and post one or two a week but that might slow down since I've just beenm hired to do a major educational writing project. Again, thanks for all the support.
Monday, 21 April 2008 12:58
great chapter! loved the detail - i was THERE with the characters - you handle the spread of the crew so well. And i agree - the story if excellent:)

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