Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

And all our skies are filled with blue--Chapter One

Saturday, April 12, 2008

Post movie, the crew of Serenity needs work. PAYING work. Badly. Unfortunately, things go somewhat awry when they find themselves in the employ of something they have struggled against their entire lives.

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Chapter One

'Big Damn Heroes'

Mal hated the snow and the cold.

Kneeling in the crunchy stuff, as he was just then, trying to keep his fingers from freezing to the metal and ceramic parts of his rifle, really brought that feeling home. He hated the snow and the cold... but you did what needed doing, and saved the complaining for later. That was the only way to get through times like this.

"Do you see 'em yet?" Jayne asked over the radio, and not for the first time, either. Mal shook his head in irritation; for a man who prided himself on his skill as a sniper, the big man could be as impatient as a five-year-old. Of course, the nature of the enemy likely wasn't helping any; Jayne was brave, but also easily spooked by things he didn't understand. This time around Mal could completely understand that feeling; there were a lot of things here he didn't understand his own self. Still, it was a Captain's job to project confidence to the troops... even when he wasn't feeling much of it himself.

"Not yet," he said, never taking his eyes off the mouth of the canyon as he spoke, the radio earbug he wore automatically keying on at the sound of his voice. "Settle down, Jayne. They'll get here when they get here." He hesitated, then gave in to his own tension. "Zoë," he murmured quietly. "Anything?"

"Nothing, Sir," came the calm response. Not that she had a good view of the approach; his second in command was tucked into a rocky niche about forty meters further up the canyon, at the base of the left-side wall. Her hiding place hadn't been chosen to provide a clear field of fire, like his and Jayne's, and he didn't much like how isolated and vulnerable she would be when the enemy finally arrived.

You do what needs doing, and save the complaining for later, he told himself again. Zoë was where she needed to be, to do the job. Still, if only Kaylee had been able to find even another fifty meters of usable wire in Serenity's storage compartments....

Mal lowered hi

Comments
Saturday, 12 April 2008 05:00
I do so love a good snowball fight. Nice characterizations. Everybody rings true. I am betting Simon will not be best pleased when our bloody little girl returns to him.

Thanks for sharing.
gentle journey,
twi
Saturday, 12 April 2008 05:10
Interesting storyline - nice to see the crew in this line of work for a change. Enjoyed your battle descriptions and visuals. Really a very good piece of writing - looking forward to more!
Saturday, 12 April 2008 06:24
I liked the story very much, look forward to the rest.
Sunday, 13 April 2008 00:24
That was actually fun, it's wonderful that you have a River can cause so much death and still play and laugh like that.
DREAMSMITHAJK
Sunday, 13 April 2008 07:18
Thanks for the comments, nice peoples.
More chapters soon.
JOLT
Sunday, 13 April 2008 23:05
That was excellent! I really enjoyed it. I especially thought the descriptions of River's fighting/thoughts while fighting were well done.

And the snowball fight at the end was a great touch to lighten it up a bit.

I look forward to reading more from you!
Monday, 14 April 2008 12:33
Very nice.

*narrows eyes*

Guess I have some competition in the BSR, huh? Bring it on :)

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