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The Return - Part 2

Saturday, March 22, 2008

Mal's leadership is put to the test as the awful news about their location and situation dawns on Serenity's crew.

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“It’s Earth.”

Simon’s words hung in the air, the disbelief on all faces obvious, no one saying a word but just staring into space at the planet growing larger in the windows of the bridge, but still far off. Jayne was the first to break the silence.

“It can’t be,” he said in a tone of reference that none on the ship had ever heard come from the big merc before. And then there was a babble of voices that drown each other out as all sought to express what they felt.

“Huh,” from Mal and it was all he said for a long moment.

“That’s crazy,” came from Wash and he tried to give one of his sheepish grins, to make light of their situation, but no one was even looking at him so he turned back to his piloting.

Kaylee was looking at Simon and her words quickly followed Wash’s. “How do you know?”

“Ain’t no one ever seen Earth, not in…like 500 years!” Jayne added, before Simon could answer Kaylee.

“It’s…impossible!” from Inara right on the heels of Jayne’s words.

“Ah….,” started Simon but no one gave him a chance.

“Earth’s almost forty light years from our quadrant,” added Book. “We couldn’t have…no…Inara’s right. It’s impossible.”

“42.4 light years and no it’s not impossible,” River countered. “We’re here, aren’t we?”

Zoe was scanning and looking and she just turned to Simon. “It seems…familiar.”

Simon waited for them all to calm down and then they were all staring at him. He knew words would never do it so he reached on by Zoe’s control panel and logged onto the Cortex screen. But there was no Cortex, just static.

“Oh, right. No Cortex,” he said in a small voice.

“What? But that…” from Jayne and then understanding began to dawn.

Simon switched to the ship’s internal memory banks. “Let’s hope we have something on here.”

“Ain’t much, “said Zoe.

“Gorramn it, Doc, we can’t have gone clear cross the galaxy!” Jayne spewed out.

“Hey, give him a sec!” said Kaylee in defense of Simon. “Ain’t no Cortex, it’s gotta mean something’s screwy.” She looked to Simon to see if he noticed

Comments
Saturday, 22 March 2008 12:18
I love this, if anything the second chapter is even better than the first. Can so see how everyone would react like this and Mal's practical approach to cautious exploration is just the right note to hit. Did smile at Kaylee wishing something wonderful had happened in Simon's bunk but knowing it hadn't. She doesn't exactly hide her interest. The explanation of the wormhole and how each of the crew reacted was well done, especially how Book was looking for the Hand of God in what had brought them here - to Earth that Was. Excellent, can't wait to find out what is on the Moon. If my homeworld were being wiped out and I had to flee it would be the place I would make for as a stop gap emergency place of safety. But who knows? Maybe it's an Alliance outpost? Or a Reaver Fast Food restaurant? Guess I have to wait for the next chapter - Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 22 March 2008 12:27
This was awsome! I loved how you pictured evryone's reaction to what happened, leave it to the Tams to be brainy ;) I hope they will make it in time for Kaylee to wave her daddy!

Keep flying ;)
Saturday, 22 March 2008 19:29
Very well done. Your descriptions of the crew`s reaction to the event was right on. I liked your choice of a worm-hole as a way to get to earth. The History Channel recently aired a fantastic series "The Universe and in one segment the theoretical worm-hole was discussed. Your description of a worm-hole was spot on. I highly recommend "The Universe" to everyone when it re-airs. Looking forward to your next installment

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