Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

The Old Girl

Thursday, February 14, 2008

A Firefly/Battlestar Galactica old and new crossover that I've been toying with for some time now. Not sure if it's on the mark character wise, or worth finishing. Please let me know.
Also, I've used 'shepard' as a description for Book, but would holyman or preacher be applicable? Seems to me Jayne would call him something other than shepard.

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The sky, lit only by the warm glow of the night cycle, failed to ease the growing tension between the two dinosaurs below. They circled each other warily.

A single palm tree in the distance was the only witness to what happened next.

“So, you’ve returned.” The T-rex growled at the Brontosaurus.

“Yes, I’ve come to take back This Land.” The Brontosaurus replied.

“HA! You? You are no match for my awesome might and sharp pointy teeth.”

“Maybe not alone, but I brought a friend and he has a really big gun.”

The T-rex turns slowly. Behind him an orange Stegosaurus sits atop a green army tank. Before the T-Rex can say a word, the air is filled with the shrill sound of alarms and the ground beneath their feet lights up as words scroll across it.

“Yeh-soo, ta ma duh..." The sandy haired pilot curses and brushes the plastic dinosaurs off his monitor with his arm. Grabbing the yoke, he fires the reverse thrusters angling his ship to avoid collision.

“C’mon baby… duck like a good girl…” The pilot grunted through clenched teeth. Even though space offered no resistance, countering forward momentum in a short distance was a tricky maneuver.

The proximity alarms finally silence as the small ship narrowly avoids the collision. It is then that the pilot hears the com.

“WASH! What’s going on up there?”

“Mal, you might wanna see this…” Wash says as he flicks on the external spot lights.

***

The spot lights play across the surface of the other ship. Wash lets out a low whistle, “She’s a monster…”

Wash and Mal peer out the window taking in the scene. They are slowly joined by the rest of the crew, rubbing sleep out of their eyes.

“It ain’t Reavers is it?” Jayne, the big mercenary asks quietly.

“Nope. Ain’t no bodies strapped to the outside.” Mal says never taking his eyes off the ship. “Sides, as patched up as she may look, she is still patched up. What I can’t figure out is why she hasn’t hailed us.”

“Probably doesn’t know we’re here. We’re too close.” The second mate prompts f

Comments
Friday, 15 February 2008 02:09
Oh wow, this was nice. I can't wait to see more! I anxiously await the next chapter.
Friday, 15 February 2008 02:37
Well, now, this has po-ten-tial written all OVER it. Nice work so far! I'll be watching for more:)
Friday, 15 February 2008 11:26
been waitin' on this for the longest time... glad there's a new chapter at last!:)
a fine one too!
Saturday, 16 February 2008 00:44
Very excited can't wait for the next chapter.
Sunday, 17 February 2008 06:01
Thank-you for the kind words!

I had written this a while ago and all but given up on it.

I feel obliged now to continue it. One question though, how much crossover is too much?
Monday, 25 February 2008 14:54
This truly is fantastic work Safe
You've perfectly captured the voices of our favourite crew, and I can't wait to read your interpretation of the new/old BSG crew.

Fantastic writing.

As for how much crossover is too much, I think any crossover which features two different verse collding together has an air of suspended disbelief about it, but you've pulled this off nicely. I don't think it would be crazy if you wanted to include Cylons in the SerenityVerse. Yes in the hands of a lesser writer it could go wrong, but you're already proved with this first chapter that you're more than accomplished for the task
Friday, 01 October 2010 16:39
Sorry for those waiting for more. Rest assured this story remains close to my heart and I want to continue it. In fact I have it all mapped out but my creative energies have been focused lately on more original works. Thank-you for your kind words!

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