Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Homecoming -Part One

Sunday, February 10, 2008

It’s three years and four months since River Tam left her brother and the crew of Serenity. 1st fanfic of the second series, featuring post BDM characters and a few of my own creation. Having feedback is like charging my battery, please comment. Part 1 of 2.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3414    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

Tweet

GANG KOU, April 2525:

“C’mon, Kaylee. One more push, you can do it!” urged Inara. Kaylee panted and braced herself to try again. Simon was torn between wanting to comfort his wife, completing the job as her doctor and the wonderment of the knowledge he was about to become a father. Kaylee pushed with all her remaining strength and Simon, with the baby’s head in his hands, felt it ease from Kaylee’s body, slowly at first and then with a rush.

“That’s it! You’ve done it, bao bei !” Kaylee flopped back, exhausted. Simon stood up straight holding his new baby daughter as she opened her mouth and started screaming. Kaylee opened her eyes again and gave a tired smile, glad it was all over. She had been especially worried about the labour after Inga’s tragic problems in February. Inara stepped back to give them some privacy, and then decided to leave and go tell the others, who she knew would be waiting outside for news. She walked out of the Tam house into the bright sunlight, having to shade her eyes.

“Well?” said Mal, expectantly and he wasn’t the only one waiting. Inara went over to him and took their daughter, Serra, out of his arms. Unlike her tempestuous parents, she was an exceedingly quiet baby and at this moment was taking one of her many trademark snoozes.

“It’s a girl,” she said with a wide smile. Jayne whooped and pulled out the cigars from his pocket, handing one to Mal and another one to his brother. Matt declined, specially since one cigar would likely make him cough for a month, but he was glad of the gesture. He was also not about to repeat what was fastly becoming a tradition each time a baby had been born; two days of drunken celebration, or close to. There was too much work to be done, Matt thought, and his brother and their friends didn’t need much of an excuse to celebrate. Simon and Kaylee’s child was the fifth child to be born at Gang Kou since he had arrived. The baby would be closely followed in several more months by Jayne and Esper’s fourth child. His br

Comments
Sunday, 10 February 2008 16:57
For my other main characters of Karl Jacobsson and Bane Pye, see my log.
Sunday, 10 February 2008 18:52
Nice to see the next installment--but how will River's new insights affect the BDH's and extended families?
Wednesday, 13 February 2008 02:36
Utterly, utterly fantastic work here, hermitsrest! While it's odd not to be beta reading your work - though the break is a relief at the moment since I am working crap hours - I am definitely once again drawn in to your world :D

I do have to say though...River's revelations on the connection between the Academy in its former guise, the slave ships and the Academy under its current guise - taken with the look at the lives of Serenity's crew on Deutschland - does make me wonder if River'e eventual return to the fold will be both rocky and a siren call to something that they seemingly have given up: the for-the-greater-good kind of questing. I note this because all the main BDHs have at least one child now, with Simon and Kaylee just welcoming April into the 'Verse, and the risks are now compounded with their rather sedimentary nature. Still...I don't doubt the fight will be taken up somehow ;)

BEB

Post Your Comments

You must log in to post comments.