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Reavers Return - Epilogue

Thursday, February 7, 2008

Serenity returns to Gang Kou two and a half months after the Reaver attack. Grateful thanks to BlueEyedBrigadier for the beta. Having feedback is like charging my battery, please comment.

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Mal never imagined he would’ve been so glad to return to Gang Kou, but they’d been away a long time and the Alliance had finally gone, taking their typical sweet time in sorting out the slave ship mess. They’d been waved two weeks ago by Jayne to say the coast was clear, and it couldn’t have come soon enough. River still piloted but always under the watchful eye of someone else, barely speaking a word to anyone and Mal was more than concerned she might flip out again. His collar bone was healing very slowly and still pained him some, one of the other reasons he was happy to be back. Some rest, just like the doctor kept ordering. Things were still very tense on ship or rather he was tense, and worried about River. The only time he’d been able to relax lately was when Serenity was grounded. Now it was winter, business was always slow and they had a place to wait it out.

As soon as the ramp went down Simon jumped off, keen to see how his other patient was doing. Glad for a change to be away from his sister, who was not the same since the Reaver attack. Mal had grounded her for a week after the event, and after that she had continued to pilot with no problems, but that was all she did. The rest of the time was spent in her bunk, ignoring everyone, including him. It had kept him awake on many nights. Simon hurried towards Jayne and Esper’s house. Waves on Esper’s condition were not good enough for him, especially as she was having twins. It was only his second delivery – having missed out on most of Marcus’ birth. He was not entirely sure he was ready to deliver twins, but he’d done enough research in the last few months to cover pretty much every eventuality. Although Simon knew Esper would be large, even he was not quite prepared for how huge she looked at seven months.

“I know!” she exclaimed, at his shocked expression. “I don’t think I’ll be able to keep this from Jayne any longer – he makes any more comments on how large I’m gettin’, he ain’t gonna see the day they’re born.” Simon hid a

Comments
Thursday, 07 February 2008 10:26
Those of you who've been kind enough to follow my whole series, I would also appreciate anything you might want to add in your comments covering it as a whole.

Don't worry, you won't have to wait long for the next series!
SUVIE
Thursday, 07 February 2008 18:54
After all that you have blessed us with, I will wait patiently for the next series.

You have a gift!
Thursday, 07 February 2008 21:53
I'd be really interested if you've got a favourite in the series. My personal favourite is One Careful Owner, which was SO much fun to write. Although, it's difficult cuz there's lots of bits in each one that I loved writing - like Zoe's scenes in Ich Liebe Dich, the first part of Ships in the Night, the heist in Firstborn...I could go on, but I'd probably bore you all!
LADYGUNN
Friday, 08 February 2008 02:17
Whoa - these last two chapters were absolutely mind-blowing. Wow. The whole thing with River & Stan & then River deciding to leave... I also liked that you drew the movie in some with Mary being one of the people in the vault.

I'm not usually a fan of OCs, but I love your Bane, Esper & the whole Pye clan.
Saturday, 09 February 2008 22:12
It's a small change, but having Zoe feel something besides fury at River's actions does make things - at least for me - stay grounded. Everyone had/has a right to be cheesed at River...but having Zoe be the only one not forgiving her and acting completely aloof? Just didn't see to sit well, so the addition of more background was totally awesome:D

BEB

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