Love, Loyalty and Serenity Part Four
Thursday, January 31, 2008
Inara gets kidnapped. The crew goes to rescue her. Mal helps her recover from her ordeal. M/I.
CATEGORY: FICTION
TIMES READ: 1821
RATING: 9.0 (PG13)
SERIES: FIREFLY
A/N: This is the second to last chapter in this story. Hope you like!
“We’re in orbit around Paquin, Cap’n.” Wash had his boot-clad feet on the controls because his hands were cushioning his head. If he were any more relaxed, he’d be asleep. The view visible through the glass was breathtaking. Paquin was a large planet distinguished by colorful bands of rock and dust. It had one smallish ocean that shone like a turquoise jewel in the equatorial regions.
“Shiny. Set down near the water. But not too close to town. Don’t need no civilization.”
Civilization was a nice word for the loosely organized collection of little towns scraping out a living on this hot, dry planet. The Alliance largely ignored this remote system; hence the reason Mal had chosen to set down here. That, and the fact that he had been able to get work here on more than one occasion. The warm equatorial ocean surrounded by white sand beaches had also played into his decision to park Serenity here for a week or two, at least until they’d picked up a few supplies, done some overdue maintenance on their ship and smelled out any jobs that might bring in income.
Kaylee was the first one outside when the hatch was fully opened, but River and Simon were close behind. Wash had set them down a few hundred yards from the edge of the sea. Kaylee ran barefoot through the sand and into the waves up to her knees. Her whoop of delight blew back to Serenity on a brisk breeze.
“Nice choice, Cap’n,” Zoe said.
“I’m inclined to agree,” Mal answered. He followed his second down to the water’s edge and watched his crew playing like delighted children. Simon looked over Mal’s head back at the ship and nodded to Mal. Mal turned and saw Inara standing in the shadow of the hold, still inside the ship as if she couldn’t make up her mind whether to chance coming out or not.
“Is she well enough to walk around, Simon?”
“For a short while, yes; I think it would be good for her.”
Slowly and casually, Mal walked up to her with
Thursday, 31 January 2008 09:50
I really liked this. I'm thinking that once they are safely back on Serenity it might be an idea if one of them waved the Ranch to tell Sir Benton something of what had happened so that he would understand Inara had not slighted up but was actually recovering from a trauma. They don't have to tell him she had been raped. Mind you, as long as Inara is away from there that is all that matters. Kaylee must be feeling horrible her own self for letting Inara go off and agreeing to cover for her so no one would know. If she hadn't had that slip who knows what state Inara would have ended up in. Shudder to think. Still on the upside she now remembers so perhaps she can start to heal in ernest. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 31 January 2008 15:42
This was to say the least BRILLIANT!! I think even if Inara explains to her client what happened, her career would be no good to her anymore, with what her work was... it'll just remind her of what happened. I really loved you made Mal be there for her every moment (she needs him big time) also the protectiveness for her is very natural. I hope you don't mind me assuming but I think this whole thing actually will have a silver lining for their relationship!
Keep flying ;)
DARBYMONSTER
Thursday, 31 January 2008 23:14
I get that you're a M/I fan, but you're bringing them out of character in this. Fixing the ship? Solar panels? There is a reason for a crew with complementary skills and interests. In the universe you're writing, it appear Mal & Inara can do everything, and that's not true to their characters. They are interesting in their own right, with their own abilites and flaws. Skimming over their flaws -- suddenly they can talk honestly with each other? -- doesn't serve the character or the universe.
Friday, 01 February 2008 02:40
hmmm... I don't find this that much out of character. They haven't disclosed any hidden truths about their feelings for each other. Even though, Mal would love to initiate that conversation as we see in the shuttle scene (BDM) or at the end of HoG. I don't really see it as over-stepping their well guarded emotional boundries.
Mal is capable of concern for her safety and physical well being, as we see at the end of OiS. And she is recovering from a horrible traumatic event that has left her scared. As flawed as Mal maybe, I can't see him calling her a whore or demeaning her, in this situation. What would be the point?
I think I'm with AMDOBELL on this one, I really like it.
I do think Inara needs HELP! And Mal may not be capable of providing it or “solving her problem”, at this time.
Saturday, 02 February 2008 06:34
I dunno people... 'Till now Mal has done a great job of taking care of her and it's quite obvious that he changes his 'you're a whore' attitude after all of this...just my humble opinion.
Keep flying ;)
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