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Falling through the Deep Slot - Part One

Tuesday, December 25, 2007

As a dangerous high-speed trip to Hera begins, the crew wait to find out what will happen to the Core worlds, and Mal and Inara try to figure out the rules of their new affair.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3041    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Falling through the Deep Slot

Part One

(Simon.)

"I... I don't think I can watch any more of this," Kaylee said, shuddering and getting up from the narrow two-person couch in Serenity's lounge. (I didn't particularly like the fact that she wasn't beside me anymore, but understood why.) "It - it's not like they're really telling us anything new at this point, just replaying the vids that they've got over and over again, and talkin' more about what they think of it all..." She reached out for the control that would darken the screen, but thought better of enforcing her will upon everybody else's viewing choice, no matter how good her reasons were.

"The way of the 'verse, Kaylee," Mal said softly, a bitter smile on his face. "When all is said and done, the Cortex news networks only care about ratings, and following the pack instinct. Nobody wants to stop focusing on a story like this, no matter how little of note they have to say - or how it affects the spirit of those who can't stop watching..."

"Oooh, hey, violence and gore!" Jayne exclaimed, passing through at just the right moment and getting distracted by the scene being shown - an argument turning into a knife-fight in a ravaged urban neighborhood, the street lit by waste-receptacle fires. "What's the series? Or is it a feature??"

"Actually, despite the high quality of the brutality being shown, this wasn't staged for our entertainment by the vid studios," I muttered in disgust, standing up and embracing Kaylee as a way to show that I supported her. "At least, not as far as we know. It's being aired as news footage from the Sihnon riots."

"Ohh." Jayne considered that, then pulled a small bag of self-puffing corn out of one of his big cargo pockets. "Seems like good viewing anyway."

I shared a look with Kaylee, and we left the lounge together - to my surpirse, we were followed by Mal, Zoe, and Inara, which would leave Jayne alone in there. As the five of us milled around in the hallway uncertainly, an unfamiliar voice called out. "Hello, capt

Comments
Tuesday, 25 December 2007 18:23
Enjoyed Simon's, River's and Mal’s POV


Interesting portrayal of Mal once he succumbs to Inara's indefinable allure, and the subtle eroticism of their love making

Zoë’s quest for Wash's sperm is quirky and fits well in the sci-fi Firefly verse, nice job on that little twist

looking for more
Wednesday, 26 December 2007 12:08
I really loved the Mal/Inara scenes - I just think that Mal should come clear with her about his thoughts so that he'll get answers and won't be bothered by them again and how could he expect her to think about marrige when he didn't even bring the topic up?

The aliance is cracking and I think this might actually come handy to our crew! I'm glad you're making the sequel of your first story =)

Keep flying ;)
Friday, 28 December 2007 04:39
Glad you were able to post your sequel so soon. It's a fun story with lots of little quirks.

I hope that Mal and Inara continuew to work things out because it is just so fluffy. And I have a yen that River ought to kiss that boy.

I am also impressed with the first person POV you don't see that often, it was a fun switch.

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