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Shan Yu! I Bite My Thumb At You - Part Two

Friday, December 14, 2007

Slavers attack Hannover and one of Serenity’s crew has first-hand knowledge of their ship, which might mean it can be stopped before it breaks atmo. 17th fanfic featuring post BDM characters and a few of my own creation. Grateful thanks to BlueEyedBrigadier for the beta. Having feedback is like charging my battery, please comment. Part 2 of 2.

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There were too many ships and not enough armed Deutschlanders to prevent them. Zoe and Mal, positioned behind the mule for cover, shot to kill. River had been right, they were not Reavers, but they were trying to take people.

“Slavers!” Zoe shouted over the noise. They both turned as screams sounded behind them, some of the children were being herded up the ramp of one of the shuttle. Zoe stood up and broke cover, still firing, so did Mal. Two of the children among the group were Ishmael and Lukas. Before they could reach them, they saw River seemingly fly through the air to land a kick on one of the slavers, before twisting another man’s neck, breaking it quickly and efficiently. Mal fired at the next man aiming his gun at her, but a fraction too late, so a bullet caught her in the shoulder, flinging her to the ground. Mal turned as he saw one of the shuttles take off again, full of people.

Mal ran to River, but she was already sitting up and holding her shoulder. Her eyes widened as he crouched down to help her.

“I’m alright. You need to find the main ship. Bane’s in trouble. Go!” she added at the end. Mal looked around. Zoe fired at another slaver, right between the eyes, before running up the ramp to take out the pilot and any others.

“Zoe!” he shouted, “Don’t shoot the pilot!” Mal then shouted to Hans, who was already running towards them.

“My son iz safe?” Mal pointed to where the children had been herded.

“Yes. We need to find where they’ve taken the others.” Hans nodded and called out to his mother who was tending to his injured father. Without hesitating, she threw him his gun.

~

Bane watched the huge behemoth come down to land and approached from the blind side, fully aware of how much notice they would take of a tiny lone person on a mule. It would not be hard to get on board, but it would be hard to get to the engine room undetected. Bane did not intend to allow this gé zhi wō ship to take off ever again, even if she could not escape afterwards. All other t

Comments
Friday, 14 December 2007 09:06
Please please post your thoughts as (good or bad) it inspires me to keep writing.
Synopsis on crew members Bane Pye & Karl Jacobsson:
Bane Pye: First contact with Serenity shortly after BDM when Mal contracts her for a heist (Hun Dan). Doesn’t get taken on as crew until the following year (Humped). Like Mal and Zoe she fought in the war but did sabotage work blowing up Alliance facilities with her mother. She can conjure up an alias as sure as breath. She can also conjure up a bomb in the same way.

Karl Jacobsson: Signed on to Serenity in November 2518, after Hun Dan. Skills: Gun-hand and muscle like Jayne. Criminal past like Jayne but also served time as well. You can imagine why they get on so well. Karl does think about the bigger picture more and after Ghosts in the Past, he has a major secret of his own revealed.
FIREFLYJO
Friday, 14 December 2007 18:55
Wow, what a ride :) Well written as always, the characters just jump from the screen.

Shocking as it was to learn about Bane, you have done a great job of writing compassionately.

Can't wait to read more of this series, thanks heaps.

Jo
Saturday, 15 December 2007 00:24
Excellent work! And I'll admit it, I shed a tear or two when Bane's sight finally went. Beautifully done!
Wednesday, 19 December 2007 17:27
Oooh, it broke my heart the way Bane finally loses her sight, but makes it to Karl just in time. Wow...it's sorta over the top, but in a good way. You handled it just right, without making it too sappy.

:-)
LADYGUNN
Saturday, 19 January 2008 20:57
Man, if they ever do another season of Firefly (pretty, pretty please), the writers' job will be easy - just use your stories. I can so see this happening on the show. You captured everyone's voices & personalities perfectly. And I love your OCs. Awesome, awesome work!
Friday, 29 February 2008 15:17
this too is one of my faves HR - and shows your versatility! top notch!:)

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