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THE REFLECTION SERIES: 7. "Hindsight"

Wednesday, August 25, 2004

"The crew try frantically to think of a way out of their predicament. Inara is asked to help Tollan one last time. Meanwhile some people just cannot leave the War-that-was behind them."

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TITLE: "HINDSIGHT"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: New. SEQUEL to "A QUESTION OF TRUST".

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "The crew try frantically to think of a way out of

their predicament. Inara is asked to help Tollan one last time.

Meanwhile some people just cannot leave the War-that-was

behind them."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"HINDSIGHT"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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Kaylee was upset. "I can't believe you're blamin' this on the Cap'n!"

Wash felt a brief stab of guilt but quickly gave it the coup de grace. "It's his place to be here with us not galivantin' off an' doin' what the gorram he wants." He knew he was being unfair but he just couldn't seem to stop himself. Anything was better than admitting where the blame belonged. Besides, Malcolm Reynolds was the Captain and everyone knew the Captain was supposed to go down with his ship. Wasn't he?

An awkward silence fell. Simon had been openly shocked at the pilot's words and seeing the hurt and anger on Kaylee's face spurred him into speaking out. "This isn't the Captain's fault, Wash, and you know it. He's as entitled to a few days break as we are and we did spring this on him."

The pilot looked surprised. "What? I can't believe you're defending him now. You don't even like him."

Simon flushed. "That's not true. I'll admit when we first met I thought he was a rude, arrogant and ignorant bully of a man but that was before I knew him."

"You think you know him now?"

The doctor hesitated. He was not sure any of them really knew the Captain but it didn't seem the time or place to say such a thing.

Comments
Wednesday, 25 August 2004 14:30
See, now you've got me all sorts of anticipating the next installment!! Beautiful work, and I can't wait to find out exactly what River is up to...
Wednesday, 25 August 2004 14:40
Another FAB episode Alison. What will Inara do? Thomas doesn't have much time, so can she just leave him & Tollan without honouring her commitment? But how can she ignore Wash's plea for help?

And how else will Thomas and Tollan fit into the story? Where's River? Does Badger know who she really is? What will happen to Mal?

So many questions... PLEASE hurry and post! I check several times a day to see if there is a new installment from you, and when there is I have to stop everything and read it :)
Wednesday, 25 August 2004 18:39
Shiny story, no doubt about it. I'm just missing the easy joy of Mal's life at the ranch up until now, is all.
Thursday, 26 August 2004 08:20
Argh... rescues in the hands of Inara and River with Mal apparently on his own. Peril on all sides...

Happy, as ever, to have a new chapter to enjoy! Thanks.
Saturday, 28 August 2004 14:54
I found the Tollan/Thomas love story section really moving. Beautifully done. And I love the way you depicted Inara's reaction - so full of grace and kindess.

Marvellous dialogue for Badger too. I could actually hear his voice as I was reading that bit.

Oh and Mal .... dear, oh dear, oh dear ...
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Wednesday, 06 July 2005 11:26
hello all u knobjokies out there, your a caknose!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

all my love betty and jimxxxx


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