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The Dr. Tam Journals - Part 4 - Shindig - Repost

Thursday, November 8, 2007

Kaylee fears Simon is going to discover she has been reading his journals as morning comes.

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The Dr. Tam Journals – Part 4 – Shindig

“Kaylee, Kaylee!” His voice came from a distant part of her mind but she knew it was Simon and he didn’t sound happy.

“Kaylee, wake up,” he said and his voice sounded cold, none of the warmth and love he usually had for her. She didn’t want to wake up, wanted to stay in this warm place, because she knew he had found her reading his journal, and he was mad. But there was no avoiding him, and she knew this had to be dealt with and it was all her own fault. She should have known better and should have put the journal away after she had realized what it was. Slowly she opened her eyes.

She was in bed, in their room, not on the sofa in the passenger lounge. As she tried to get her bearings she focused on Simon standing over her in a doctor’s gown. Something wasn’t quite right.

“Kaylee, I want a divorce,” he said and his cold voice chilled her to the marrow of her bones. “You’ve invaded my privacy. I cannot forgive you.”

“Simon! Wait! I can explain!” she cried as she sat up in the bed, her head spinning from all that was happening.

He didn’t even look at her. “I’m late for the hospital. When I get back I want you and your things gone.”

“Simon! I love you!” she cried.

“Then you shouldn’t have read my journal. You’ve ruined everything,” he said and walked out the door in his gown and with his doctor’s bag in his hand.

She lay on the bed and cried and cried until she felt there were no more tears to be found in the ‘verse and then she drifted off to sleep…

“Kaylee, Kaylee!” came the voice again, but this time it wasn’t Simon. She opened her eyes and there was Mal, gently touching her shoulder.

She was on the sofa in the lounge and the red book was open across her chest. Mal stood over her.

“Hey, little Kaylee. What you doing here? You and the doc have a fight?’ he said.

Kaylee sat up quickly and the book fell to the floor. Mal reached to pick it up but she quickly grabbed it and held it to her chest. He stood back a little surprised at her r

Comments
Thursday, 08 November 2007 23:16
I read this on the original posting and loved it completely. If I remember properly, you'd already covered "Our Mrs. Reynolds". I was really hoping for a journal entry covering the deleted scene where River told Book that she and Simon wanted to get married. I think his private reaction could have been very funny--both to Kaylee and for us.
Friday, 09 November 2007 01:42
Thanks BrerRabbit. At the moment I have no plans to change anything in the current stories, just to repost as is. I might have to clean up the grammar and spelling a bit as these reposts are my saved first drafts and haven't been edited much. Also, the scene you mentioned was a cut scene and I haven't added too many of them unless it served the story since many people didn't see them first time around. Although the one you mention is a good one from Simon's side but I think he would want to leave something like that out of his journal. It was a tad bit embarrassing for him afterall! I'm still writing the remainder of the series but this whole hacking thing and disappearing fanfics has put me in a foul mood the last week so it might be a few more days before we see more of the continuing story.
Friday, 09 November 2007 21:54
Oh, I understand. I just thought it would have been funny, and it would have been interesting to see Kaylee's reaction to River wanting to marry her brother. It also might have given her a better idea of how devoted they are to each other. Hope you have an entry concerning River spying on them making love (from the end of the movie) if your journal entries make it that far. (I'm hoping they do.) I also hope there's an entry for just prior the wedding so we can see if Simon is going to be a nervous groom. Keep up the stellar work!!!!!!!!

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