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THE REFLECTION SERIES: 4. "Complications"

Thursday, August 12, 2004

"As the novelty of Minerva wears off the crew have a decision to make. Meanwhile Mal meets the rest of Rafe Connor's crew and for the first time in a long while feels a sense of peace."

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TITLE: "COMPLICATIONS"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: New. SEQUEL to "PAYING DUES".

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "As the novelty of Minerva wears off the crew have

a decision to make. Meanwhile Mal meets the rest of Rafe Connor's

crew and for the first time in a long while feels a sense of peace."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"COMPLICATIONS"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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The smells from the kitchen were all kinds of tantalising but Zoe was sure she would not be able to eat a gorram thing. The Shepherd watched the worry on her face and knew what she was thinking. Knew she was also blaming herself which was about as much use as a snowball in *diyu*. Everybody had been talking all at once, some offering advice, others wanting to know what the good gorram they were going to do. Simon noticed that River seemed more focused than normal and was very quiet, her eyes following the speakers as if her ears didn't work. "River, are you okay?"

Even though he had whispered the back and forth of conversation hitched as if only her answer would kick start it back into motion. "River's fine." His sister said then turned and looked at his plate, the Preacher's culinary masterpiece hardly touched at all. "You should eat your greens."

Jayne gave a muffled chuckle. "I'll eat 'em for ya if ya ain't got room, doc."

Kaylee batted his hand away as he made to reach over the table but it was half hearted. Truth to tell they were all happy for even a little pathetic light relief about now. Shepherd Book served himself last then sat down, hesitating as to whether or not to pray out loud. Then

Comments
Thursday, 12 August 2004 23:37
Keep going, keep going!! Couldn't wait to get back from vacation to see the newest chapter!! Love your writing!
Friday, 13 August 2004 07:45
Zoe, Zoe... tsk, tsk, tsk... about to screw up big time, I'm thinking.

Really enjoying this tale--was happy to see a new chapter up! I'm finding the easy pacing particularly enjoyable--nice to see a relaxed (if totally self-deluded) Mal in the contrast to the now-tense and anxious Zoe. Works well.

I neglected to mention before how tickled I was that you did give them the naked beach holidy at the end of your last series, then promptly turned around in this one and had a naked beach holiday turn bad on them. Very fine.
Friday, 13 August 2004 09:02
How do you do it? Where do these fabulous characters come from? Anyway, wonderful story. Wonder if Zoe knows her cargo is radioactive, or as good as. And River... All very shiny.
MAI
Saturday, 14 August 2004 05:46
Ali,
You did it again, great story! I love how we can "see" the shift in dynamics between the characters without their beloved captain. Just one thing... needs more SIMON! :) Can't wait to read the next parts.
Saturday, 14 August 2004 17:21
Am I just plain weird? Because I'm finding happy, relaxed Sabbatical!Mal heart-breaking? I'm more worried about him in this story than I've been in any of your other stuff, Ali. Because all this content now can mean only one thing ....

Great. Love it. When's the next chapter?
Monday, 17 October 2011 03:54
Kaylee bit her bottom lip. As if sensing her discomfort Simon gently squeezed her hand and she began to feel better.

AWWWW SIMON/KAYLEE<3<3<3

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