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THE REFLECTION SERIES: 3. "Paying Dues"

Saturday, August 7, 2004

"As Mal settles into his new life his former crew gradually gravitate back to Serenity. Slowly coming to the realisation that everything has changed."

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TITLE: "PAYING DUES"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: JAYNE/Other.

RATING: NC-17.

STATUS: New. SEQUEL to "A NEW DREAM".

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "As Mal settles into his new life his former

crew gradually gravitate back to Serenity. Slowly coming

to the realisation that everything has changed."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"PAYING DUES"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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The water was freezing cold but he didn't care. Just wanted to wash the dirt and stench off him. Rafe brought out a bar of carbolic soap and some towels. Wanted to burn Mal's clothes there and then but the look on his face stopped him. "They'd be best in ashes." The rancher explained apologetically.

Mal shook his head, naked and dripping wet as he shivered and rubbed himself down with the larger of the two towels. "I'll wash 'em through. Let the good air dry 'em."

"Son, there ain't enough clean air in the 'verse to take that kind'a taint off them clothes."

The two men stared at each other. Mal shivered harder this time and that prompted him to quickly finish drying off so he could put his spare set of clothes on. Reluctantly he gave a nod and watched poker faced as Rafe used a pair of washerwoman's tongs to pick up the set he had been wearing.

"Believe me Mal some day you'll thank me."

He couldn't speak so he nodded, missing the little drift of amusement in the other man's eyes. A few minutes later Rafe returned and gave Mal a satisfied nod, happy to see a much shinier face looking back at him. The former Captain cleaned up good. "Somethin' amuse you?"

Rafe chuckled. "Just waitin' on you to finish so's we can go inside. Have to

Comments
Sunday, 08 August 2004 02:03
More please! Your cliffhangers are jsut a little bit more evil than mine - well done!
Sunday, 08 August 2004 07:59
Nice. I'm enjoying the relaxed pacing with the problems building in a gradual sort of way.

Mal's new--ahem!--'family' seems nice. Too nice... Not in the 'they're ominous' way, but in the they're seducing him away from his other, more troublesome clan.

Very much enjoying this one thus far and looking forward to more.
Sunday, 08 August 2004 12:46
After a hundred chapters of long-suffering-Mal, it's been nice to see Mal slip into a relaxing, happy place ('sides River). It's such a wonderful family he's found, now, but I wonder if he'll come to miss his old, eccentric one. As for the rest of our heroes, it was funny to hear Zoe refer to her strength as "Captain" again, instead of the "Mal" he last insisted on.
Saturday, 14 August 2004 12:18
OK, my brain shorted out with the opening Nekkid!Mal scene ...

Tantalizing hints at trouble to come, leaving me hungry for more.

BTW, I love the way you depict Mal's affinity with children. It highlights what I see as his essential innocence despite the grim life he's led.

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