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A Story I Tried to Write

Tuesday, June 12, 2007

I was going through the archives of this board and I found a thread where I had flip out in last year before I got banned. I pieced it all together and I thought is was actually rather creative, but I could be wrong. It won't be the first time for that. I was wondering should I finish this or leave it alone?

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Hi!

I was going through the archives and found a bit of my insanity from last year her eon this board in a thread that’s in Troll Country. I found myself laughing at all of this because it seemed like it was creative insanity at its best, or at least I think so. Read the whole thing and tell me what you think. Should I finish this or just forget it?

Shadowfly was a character account I had created and then used to give people a hard time on this board. I must admit I had fun using this character to be a complete pig, but eventually I was found out. One night I kinda flipped and made this story up. Read through the whole thing and give me some feedback.

-River

Shadowfly:

My work here is complete. I've done you in River6213. There's no going back now. You are nothing now and I will take all that is mine. I also love the way they roasted your sorry ass in the Moderator thread lol! Serves you right bitch.

River6213:

I have nothing worth taking moron, but I think that it's you that have a problem. I won't back down this time. I've thought about it...I've allowed you free reign for such a long period that you have become real, and have dominated almost every aspect of my life, but you know what? You are not real at all.

You are nothing more than something I created long ago to protect me and now your usefulness is at an end. You no longer protect me...you attack everything and it makes living difficult. It makes moving forward a problem.

River6213 sighs and begins to sing:

River6213:

Every single night, the same arrangements

I go out and fight the fight.

Still I always feel the strange estrangement

Nothing here is real, nothing here is right.

I've been making shows of trading blows

Just hoping no one knows

That I've been going through the motions,

Walking through the part

Nothing seems to penetrate my heart.

I was always brave and kind of righteous

Now I find I'm wavering.

Crawl out of your grave, you find this fight

Just doesn't mean a thing.

Going through the motions,

Comments
Thursday, 14 June 2007 16:21
When I saw River6213 attached to a fanfic, I had to check it out. You don't disapoint. This is a bizarre and exiting tale.
I really hope you continue this bit of fun insanity.

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