Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

A Lost Art - Part 9

Friday, June 8, 2007

Post-BDM; A letter or two (or five) were sent out from Serenity's crew and suddenly, they seem to find themselves in danger. It's all Joss's characters and 'verse, i'm just borrowing it for a spell... Only one chapter left, now...take a deep breath and remember to let it out when the black spots start showing at the edge of your vision... As always, comments are so extremely welcome!!!

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River opened her eyes to stare at the man in the doorway. She had known he was there. She wanted to startle him. She did. He recovered.

"So you're River Tam," he said slowly. She didn't answer. She listened to his fear of her grow.

"You know," he went on, his voice hiding his fear well. "If the child isn't found soon, your father may decide to kill your friends and your brother and take you back in its place."

"The child is dead," she responded, pulling words from Kaylee's nightmare. "The blood...covered my hands...my arms...who would have thought...so much blood in him?" She cried out and strained against the straps that held her down so suddenly the man in the doorway backed away from her. Simon woke - he had been sleeping with his arms around his wife next to the cot - and began shushing his sister before he noticed the man in the doorway.

"What did you do?" he demanded. Inara was now awake, as well, and trying to calm River. Kaylee woke from her dream but did not stir. Zoë slept on, the drugs seeing to it she rested.

"Where is he buried?" Vincent asked from his safe distance as River's cry subsided. "He must be dead, I can see it in your eyes and in your wife's eyes...just tell me where he is buried so this can all end."

"End?" Inara turned, her anger reaching its peak. "It doesn't 'end' with a burial. That child was...he was more than a life to us, he was hope and renewal and something pure! We will take his memory with us...forever...he has been carved into our hearts and you speak of his grave as the end?" She shook her head and turned back to River. Until Kaylee's heartbroken face, she had thought it was a solid cover. Now...she did not want it to be true, but...Kaylee wouldn't speak of her son. Vincent was right, Kaylee's hollow eyes gave away the fact that the child had died...and now River...

Vincent turned and left the med bay, sick to his stomach. He had committed crimes - truly heinous crimes - in his life, but seeing them mourn a life that had not even made it to soli

Comments
Friday, 08 June 2007 18:46
Wow, talk about a confusing few minutes with mayhem errupting as Regan passes the gun to River then to Simon, doing the biggest bravest thing she has ever done in her life. Glad Gabriel the Monster is dead (please tell me he is dead) and that all our Heroes are coming together. And Regan's reward will be that she finally gets to see her grandson. Can't wait for the next part. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 08 June 2007 19:31
Wow, nice, tense, end to this chapter but....Simon fell too? Kaylee is crying over him! He better get to see his son again!
Saturday, 09 June 2007 00:42
Damn...now that's an ending worthy of Whedon, kacidilla! Definitely can't wait to see the last part of this tale, cuz Simon has to survive. He has to!

BEB
Saturday, 09 June 2007 03:29
You certainly kept up the excitement through this whole episode - loved the character Wardy vry much - you made him feel very real.
Saturday, 09 June 2007 03:40
Oh my, this is all kinds of tense and heart-breaking. Your description of Kaylee and the hollowness in her eyes because she thinks her son's dead is just unbelievable. And the whole interplay between Gabriel, Regan and Simon was unbelievably tense. I'm not sure I got all of the nuances, but it was still a heck of a lot of fun to read. You better not kill Simon, though!
Saturday, 09 June 2007 21:48
Eeek! So much tension and angst, I don't know how to take it. I completely feel for Regan, I think she was so brave in doing what she did at the end there. Good for her! I just hope Jayne's shot was true and that Gabriel is actually dead.

I hope Simon isn't dead!!! Ooh, also I loved the camaraderie and interaction between Jayne and Mal, and the whole thing about being at each other's backs.

Great chapter!
Wednesday, 19 September 2007 16:30
Wow, I love the tension and the way the action builds up to the cliff-hanger ending!

I don't know why this question just now popped into my head, but if they are so keen to get their hands on more of River and Simon's bloodline -- why not harvest DNA, eggs, etc. from Regan and Gabriel? After all, they created their children. Not to be crude, but that's what a horse breeder would do to try and recreate a Kentucky Derby winner. It doesn't always work that way of course, but River and Simon are both brilliant so the odds are in their favor.

Just sayin' is all!

:-)

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