Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

A Lost Art - Part 8

Thursday, June 7, 2007

Post-BDM; A letter or two (or five) were sent out from Serenity's crew and suddenly, they seem to find themselves in danger. It's all Joss's characters and 'verse, i'm just borrowing it for a spell... We're coming up to the end soon, folks, i promise...just hold tight a bit longer... As always, comments are so extremely welcome!!!

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"What do you mean 'dead'?" Gabriel Tam asked coolly. Vincent took a deep breath before answering the man standing before him.

"According to your son," he explained, still trying to deduce why the man was standing before him. "A stray bullet caught the child as he was being carried by your daughter. The mother of the child is still not speaking. The first mate says she's been like this since the boy was pronounced dead."

"Why are they still alive?" Gabriel hissed.

"I thought you might like to question them yourself," Vincent replied. "I had thought to bring them to you personally."

"Where are they?"

"Sir, I feel I must ask," Vincent began politely, but gave up. The money wasn't worth this much frustration. "Why are you here?"

"River's letter indicated they could be contacted on this sad excuse for a moon," Gabriel sniffed. "I didn't feel you were getting the job done."

Vincent's jaw clenched as he held himself in check. He smiled tightly and fumed inwardly. Not only had they lied about the child's whereabouts - for if they had landed here to bury the brat as they had claimed, the girl's letter would not have listed this as a reference - but this hun dan was still going to try to back out of paying him. He kept his thoughts to himself, though, and decided to let Tam figure it out on his own.

"Of course," he said, smiling tightly.

"Now, where are they?" Gabriel asked again.

"Right this way," he indicated with open palm.

There were significantly less men in his crew than he had started out on this job, and he felt no remorse in blaming Gabriel for that. The more he dealt with this particular group, the more he admired them. They were loyal to one another, not a one of them whimpered for their own life, and they were willing to die for a baby. A baby! This far from what was commonly believed to be the most civilized of the 'verse, they just continued to be decent folk...

He shook the thought away. He was being paid to retrieve a baby, not to ponder the l

Comments
Thursday, 07 June 2007 19:06
I am in so much love with this fic.

Brilliant chapter, it's good to see Gabriel has some heart... albiet shrunken and small compared to a normal one. Kaylee's probably genuinly crying over the fact that she doesn't know if Hobie's ok or not. Poor Kaylee.

Loved Book's letter to Kaylee and that he sugguested her name. :D

And yay for thrilling heroics! They're going to get everyone. Plus, the thought of Jayne carrying Hobie on his back like that is all sorts of cute.

Can't wait for more!
Thursday, 07 June 2007 21:24
I'm completely engrossed in this story. I hope Regan's warning was really meant to help, and not a trap set by Gabriel to catch them in a lie.

I like that Vincent might be seeing the error he made in taking this job. I like that we get to see a bit of humanity about him.

Of course, this must be the hardest on Hobie's parents. At least they're together. I hope Simon is able to spare some time to confort Kaylee in between taking care of his sister and hurling sarcasting remarks at his father.
Thursday, 07 June 2007 23:55
Sorry, I don't believe Gabriel has any heart at all. That play acting he did for Simon's benefit was a despicable sham and I hope he gets exactly what he deserves. I absolutely loved Simon's reaction and his dialogue was superb and so very much in character with a certain dignity that he has always had coming to the fore and showing Gabriel up even more. I am hoping the bounty hunter ends up turning on Gabriel. Also can't wait to see what plan Mal comes up with. This is a brilliant story and beautifully written, bravo! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 08 June 2007 03:36
I've been looking forward to your posts, also, kacidilla. (busy with end of school)

Good work here as usual.

Nicely sentimental without being slurpy.

Love the image of Jayne with the baby in the homemade snuggly.
Friday, 08 June 2007 18:00
Oh...I could just imagine the kinds of scenes Joss & Co. would have had involving Jayne doing his Big Bad Mercenary routine, but having it completely ruined by little Hobie strapped to his back in a makeshift papoose. Almost want to make an analogy to Chewbacca hauling the disassmbeld C-3PO around in the netting from "The Empire Strikes Back"...but Hobie's not quite as fussy as Threepio;D

BEB
Saturday, 09 June 2007 21:41
Ok, the image of Hobie tied to Jayne's back was just frickin' amazing. Totally agreed with BEB's assessment of his big bad image being ruined, but in a really funny way, so it's all good!

Gabriel is an ass, wish he would die. Vincent seems to be having second thoughts about this job, I hope he turns on Mr Tam. Simon's snappy dialogue towards his father was brilliant, especially the line about torture.

I really hope Zoe lives!!
Monday, 17 September 2007 20:56
Ooh, I love a good intrigue.

:-)

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