Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

A Lost Art - Part 6

Tuesday, June 5, 2007

Post-BDM; A letter or two (or five) were sent out from Serenity's crew and suddenly, they seem to find themselves in danger. It's all Joss's characters and 'verse, i'm just borrowing it for a spell... The letters are starting to take on a different sort of...um...meaning...now. I hope it's still acceptable... As always, comments are so extremely welcome!!!

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"What are you doing?" he asked, startling his wife. She crumpled the page in her hand as she looked up to meet his eyes.

"Nothing," she smiled forcefully. "Sophia wrote. She feels that at her age, writing is easier than getting out and visiting. You know how she can go on and on..."

He pried the paper from her hand as she spoke. He was not the man she had married so long ago, she reminded herself. After that dreadful scandal and its aftermath...after he had lost his standing among his peers, he had hardened against her. He blamed her. As if she had allowed it to happen!

"Sophia?" he questioned, catching her in her lie. "Then why does it say--"

"What does it matter now?" she pleaded. "Let them be...they're all but forgotten by everyone but you!"

"As am I," he snapped. He read the letter again. "But this...this could bring us back! Don't you see? This baby could be our chance at the life we knew then! We can go back! Don't you want the parties and the dinners? People respected us!"

"People were scared of us," she insisted. "They knew that if we wanted their lives, they could be the next to disappear!"

"Fear is respect," he argued. "It keeps those weaker than us in line."

"Don't you understand?" she tried. "We were next! That child is not a way out of a life, it is a lock on our prison door! Let them be, I beg you."

"I've done enough begging," he decided, folding the letter and placing it into his pocket. "You should feel the same way by now."

"I have made restitutions for my actions," she admitted. "This news was proof of that. This punishment, this exile...I would continue living here if I could look forward to more letters from her."

"Take another pill, Regan," Gabriel sighed, turning on his heel. "You're so much more enjoyable company when you aren't playing the victim."

Regan watched him go, her heart twisting as she realized she hadn't copied the contact information from the letter. She could only hope the executives would not see the child - her gr

Comments
Wednesday, 06 June 2007 00:00
Aaaw, Wash's letter broke my heart! So very Wash and really sweet. Great touch.

I liked Mal's no-nonsense tone and attitude when he was talking to Inara, I can easily picture him being like that in such a situation. I just hope he's right, and that the crew will be ok. The fact that everyone is so banged up is really worrying because it'll only take a little bit to overpower them and the ship...eek!
Wednesday, 06 June 2007 02:48
I really loved Wash's letter as well. I'm wondering about the Tams and the details you've built for them in this. It's very interesting.

And Mal and Inara's conversation was absolutely perfect! Loved it!
Wednesday, 06 June 2007 04:24
Well now...much as it pains to say this right now, but I agree with Mal. When Kaylee's the crew member with the best physical condition, some hard decisions need to be made about who stays aboard and who goes out. And Mal's confrontation with Inara was brilliantly handled, since we get Mal slipping into this command presence while still trying to be compassionate to her condition.

Another thing I have to note is my mixed-bag feelings for Regan Tam as she is portrayed here. I want to be sympathetic towards her...but her need for medication to cope with her pain and guilt, coupled with her inability to stand up to her husband fully? Kind of taints the desire to cheer for her. I just hope you have Regan pull out of her mental funk so the BDHs can properly defend themeslves.

BEB
Wednesday, 06 June 2007 08:14
I second BEB's reservations about Regan. I kept wanting her to grow a backbone and find a way to either get the letter back and contact Serenity to warn her children or stop him in his evil tracks. Turning to medical oblivion is not a solution to the problem, just another problem. Loved Mal's talk with Inara, taking the firm approach because he has to, because he can't lose her now. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 06 June 2007 15:15
I feel rather sorry for Regan. Hopefully, she can get over the addiction to pills and actually do something to help her children.

I can't help but think everyone has been wounded so badly, it'd almost be unbelievable if they make it out of another skirmish without someone dying.

Wash' letter was a very nice touch as well.
Monday, 17 September 2007 16:52
Wa! That letter from Wash is so sweet...and just SO like him. You didn't even need to tell us that Zoe was probably feeling a bit nostalgic and needed to read a few letters she has saved. It's just pictured in my head as I read Wash's letter to her.

:-)

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