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The Last Straw - Ch 6

Tuesday, June 5, 2007

Ch 6: The crew finds out where they're headed. Jayne seeks help from an old friend. Inara gets back in the game! Slightly more action-y.

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CHAPTER 6

Jayne stormed from the cargo bay to the passenger dorms, his mind in a whirl, looking to kick some serious gou shi out of Mattie. He burst through the door to her room, panting angrily, staring her down. She was on the bed, leaning half-upright against the wall, her legs calmly crossed at the ankle, her comm supported by both hands. She considered him with a placid frown, raising one eyebrow, making no move to hide the device. For a moment, Jayne considered the possibility that he was wrong.

“More estate issues,” he challenged, gripping the door frame so tightly it cracked.

She smirked disrespectfully. “Coming to say good night again?”

Snidely, she slid the device under her pillow, swung her feet around the side of the bed, and walked toward the door, ready to crowd him out of the space.

“I came to see who you been talkin’ to,” he growled, stepping around her easily and snatching the handheld. She didn’t even try to stop him; she just leaned haughtily against the door frame.

Either the device was encrypted or she’d done nothing but play games on the thing since she’d come on board. Jayne waved the device at her angrily. “Rule number one! Go radio silent as soon as the job starts!”

“Rule number one?” she laughed, loftily, sauntering in and taking the device. “Are you trying to teach me about crime, Mr. Cobb?”

“I am trying to save your life, girl.”

She stepped even closer to him, invading his personal space, but he refused to back up. Her voice was low and sure. “I don’t need you to save me. I know what I’m doing.”

He couldn’t help but sneer at her arrogance. “Don’t lie to me, girl. I will find out what you’re up to and I will stop you,” he promised seriously, placing emphasis on each word. They were almost nose to nose now, and Jayne took advantage of the short distance. He grabbed the comm from her hand and with a quick swing, smashed it against the floor. Mattie quickly masked the concern and fear that swept across her face with a look of annoyance.

“That was… rude,” she snipe

Comments
Tuesday, 05 June 2007 22:52
i admit, i had to go back and read River's comments a second time before realizing what she meant... and, still:
eep! definitely keeping my interest peaked, here, vb!!!
Tuesday, 05 June 2007 23:00
"My boat does not smell foul!"

I love it! And River's double-speak is creepy.
Wednesday, 06 June 2007 02:41
River's doublespeak is always creepy which is one of the reasons we love her!

This is all building nicely, although somehow I just knew Mattie'd be up to no good. Of course, Jayne is her daddy, so I'm sure it runs in the blood.
Wednesday, 06 June 2007 04:13
Now now, TamSibling...both Jayne and Mattie are good souls. Just been tarnished by rough lives and all;)

And call me ignorant, but DID River's creepy doublespeak mean exactly? It looks like she's saying Inara will take Mal to his death. Which is plausible, since Mal would charge into a dangerous situation nekkid if he thought Inara needed saving;)

BEB
Wednesday, 06 June 2007 08:03
Okay, I loved the reappearance of River. Had really been missing creepifying but somehow comforting double-speak (after all, it IS River). Seems all manner of weird that she says not a word about Mattie setting them up or what is really going on with Jayne. Her selective helpfulness is not exactly reassuring.

I really don't like Mattie but more than that Jayne doesn't seem like Jayne. I really can't see him going quite as nutso as he did in the last chapter and then not talking to anyone but being sullen and beligerant. Then that whole wave to Book instead of just telling Mal straight up. It's as if he wants the decision to tell or not tell taken out of his hands and I was surprised that Book didn't put more pressure on Jayne to do the right thing. After all if they get arrested or handed over to some *wangba dan* it won't just be Mal that will be betrayed but the whole gorram clue including little Kaylee and River. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 06 June 2007 15:06
AUTHOR NOTE:
Ah, the River double-speak. The whole reason it's double speak is because it transcends a single situation. River is not strictly talking about Inara. We just happen to be reading the scene through Mal goggles, and everyone knows what's first in Mal's mind...

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