Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

A Lost Art - Part 4

Monday, June 4, 2007

Post-BDM; A letter or two (or five) were sent out from Serenity's crew and suddenly, they seem to find themselves in danger. It's all Joss's characters and 'verse, i'm just borrowing it for a spell... Again, sorry the chapters are short, but comments are always welcome!!!

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Inara opened her eyes to see her own shuttle around her...and Mal asleep next to her. It looked as though he had tripped and fallen asleep halfway to the bed; it wouldn't actually surprise her if that was the truth. He had probably been pushing himself past his limits again...he seemed to do that often enough.

He stirred in his sleep and mumbled something about gardeners before trying to roll over using his right arm. His sharp intake of breath and the suddenly alert eyes wrenched at her heart. She tried to sit up and found a dull ache where previously she had felt a throbbing chorus of agony. She looked to him for answers...he was now cradling his arm and looking at the ceiling.

"Mal?" she tried. He looked at her and smiled tightly.

"Still stings a bit," he offered as explanation.

"I can see that," she smiled. He sat up carefully and looked at her with new concern in his face.

"We thought you'd be more comfortable in here," he said softly. "Shoulda seen us all carrying a corner of the stretcher. Next time we might just let you stay in the infirmary. I think Jayne's stitches ripped halfway here."

"Jayne's stitches?" she repeated his words back to him. He mentally kicked himself for the slip. It was the real reason he had insisted they bring her back to the shuttle. He didn't want her to know how bad things were just yet.

"Seems you and I weren't the only ones receiving guests," he admitted. "We're tryin' to suss out who sent them, though, so don't worry. Just rest."

"Who would--" Inara stopped herself with a shake of her head. She rephrased her query. "Who is on the short list?"

"Changes with every bit of information I get," Mal sighed. "Seems everyone on this boat wrote a letter with just enough hint at where we were that it could be anyone from the Alliance hunting River again to Jayne's mother looking for new knitting projects."

"I highly doubt Jayne's mother would attempt to kill us just for knitting projects," Inara replied drily. Mal looked at her with his doubt

Comments
Monday, 04 June 2007 03:17
Okay, love, love, love Zoe's last line - absolutely perfect and totally in character.

I ahve to say things are just going from bad to worse. Wouldn't it be a quick if some of the people Mal mentioned had actually joined forces to get back at him? In that case, we're in for a world of hurt!
Monday, 04 June 2007 09:51
Who says they haven't TamSibling? With the way Mal's luck has been running - with all his crew seemingly loose tongued in the writing department - he is spoilt for choice as to who the good gorram is hitting on them. Personally I am thinking it would be a neat twist if it was none of them but some new player, perhaps an ex customer or the like, venting his spleen. Whatever I loved this, especially Zoe. If we can't depend on her then the 'verse really is coming to an end. Ali D :~)
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Monday, 04 June 2007 17:59
Inara's got a sister, huh? Interesting bit of writing there, kacidilla;)

Definitely all kinds of impressed with the work you did here, I must say. I found Inara to be especially spot-on with her conversation with Mal about who could be targeting them - the mid-speech correction to her intended question was an excellent move - and her letter to Leilani was both touching and perfectly in-character for Inara playing big sister by subtly chastising her mei-mei for believing any rumours she had heard;)
Tuesday, 05 June 2007 12:50
Inara's voice was perfect in the letter, nice work there! I'm quite intrigued by the concept of her having a sister, I wonder if that'll go anywhere later on in the story.

Really sad moment between Mal and Zoe at the end there, it's not easy seeing two of the strongest people on board so disheartened and weary. Great last line though!

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