Title: Fixer Upper
Author: Eshva
Disclaimer: Joss owns everything. Or someone does. Not me, anyway.
A/N: First attempt at Firefly and feedback much appreciated
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Inara was waiting when Kaylee knocked on her shuttle door, brushes and files and varnish and an elegant china basin laid out and ready.
"Hey, 'Nara," she said, brandishing several bottles of nail polish. "I got some real pretty ones."
It was hackneyed, she knew, but Inara always felt that Kaylee burst into her shuttle like a dazzle of sunlight. Almost she envied her, the simple pleasure of bright, pretty things.
Inara ushered her toward the little table and poured water over her hands into the china basin. It would take quite some effort to remove the engine grease and accumulated grime. But she could take pleasure here too, the more subtle shadings of doing a thing beautifully for its own sake.
"I take it you enjoyed yourself at the skyplex?" she said.
"Mmhmm." Kaylee's eyes were closed and her face relaxed with pleasure as Inara delicately cleaned her hands. "Ooh, that feels nice."
"Did Simon go with you? I can't remember if you're currently speaking to him or not." Inara's smile was a little wry.
"Yeah, Simon came with me. He apologised, so we're talking again".
"What was that about? I don't think you told me." Inara reached for a towel and dried Kaylee's hands, tending each slender finger with care and thoroughness.
"Oh, he said mean things about Serenity again." She pouted a little. "I was only teasin' him about being smelly after he'd done septic vac, and he got all grumpy."
The distinctive smell of acetone filled the air and did battle with the delicate scent of incense as Inara wiped away the old chipped polish from Kaylee's fingernails. "He does seem to do septic vac far more frequently than anyone else."
Kaylee grinned. "He keeps having to do Jayne's turn and the Shepherd's when he loses at tall card. And, o' course he always does River's turn."
Inara began applying base coat, each stroke precise and elegant. "I
You can't take the sky from me
But, of course, all that means is a sequel is necessary!!! ;)
I guess I mainly have issue with how you've specifically tackled one of the big paradoxes of Kaylee's feelings for Simon: what attracts him to her is also what keeps them apart. Here, you have Kaylee almost selfishly trying to alter Simon to fit HER preconceived notion of how to get Simon to fit in amongst the crew. Problem is that Simon is a lot different than a 26th century equivalent of a Suburu Imprezza WRX (road car that's built like a racer). The Hao-Tran-Brickman (and can it really be called that after Kaylee swapped out the Brickman engine for something smaller? Makes me wonder...;D) is a machine that can't respond to someone like Kaylee altering it's entire being; Simon is a sentient being who can respond to any efforts to change his base personality. Really kind of surprised that Inara, regardless of her decision to avoid acting as Devil's Advocate about Simon with Kaylee, didn't try and respond to Kaylee's explanation. Sequel perhaps?
Still...I do think you have made an excellent first stab at writing flanfic here, Eshva. Who knows...you could have inadvertently hit on something Joss & Co. wanted to deal had the series not been cancelled:D
BEB
P.S. I can't see Kaylee being left off the septic vat duty roster. Mal might have tried, but I get the feeling Kaylee would have fought to get herself on it. Not because see enjoys cleaning out the sewage tank, but on principle;)
I like Kaylee and Inara's dicsussion. I think its one, or something similar, that they'd keep having at various points through the series. I'm sure Kaylee would grow more and more frustrated with Simon. Not sure she'd try and change him so much as just try and understand him and try to help (not force) him to fit into the world he's now living in.
Very cute little story though and I hope you write more.
Maybe a continuation of this one?
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