Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

A Lost Art - Part 3

Sunday, June 3, 2007

Post-BDM; A letter or two (or five) were sent out from Serenity's crew and suddenly, they seem to find themselves in danger. It's all Joss's characters and 'verse, i'm just borrowing it for a spell... Sorry the chapters are short...it's just where they stopped until i opened up a new page...i post once a day, until they're all up, so be patient...pretty please?

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Dear Mother,

I am inclosing some mor money for you I kno youre birthday is comming but you dint tell me wat you wanted so by youreself somethin pretty with this. Sins my last letter not much has changed. I am still workin with the crew I tole ya about and we still do what we can to make the verse a better plays to live. I aint been in no fights so stop worring. That Miranda wave werent as bad as you thawt and I keep tryin to tell ya but I think someones talking to much around ya and if he is who I think he is he is gonna here from me real soon. You tell him that if you want but I think he will catch the rite hints now.

I hope your doin shiny. I shur miss yur cookin. Tonite we had reheeted grull that wasnt no better the 2nd time around. I better git goin now. Were like to land soon and I want to git this in the male fore ya.

Love your son,

Jayne

***

"Captain?" Simon's voice was whisper-soft. Mal turned to him, releasing Inara's hand to do so.

"Keep still," Mal instructed. "They did the best they could on you, but you're going to have to doctor from your bedside a while yet."

"There were men," Simon went on, only barely conscious of Mal's words. "They fired at us...Kaylee?"

"She's fine," Mal replied. "Nothin' but a little cut on her arm and a new-found love for life."

"Good," Simon nodded, visibly relaxed. He frowned. "The baby?"

"Hobie's doin' better than his ma," Mal nodded. "Powerful set of lungs on that one, but he knew to keep quiet till the fightin' was done."

"And...River?"

"Still out," Mal answered, glancing quickly at the center bed. She had been Simon's last patient, from what Zoë had told him. Simon had been shot while working on his sister and directed Kaylee's shaking hands once Jayne had finished dispatching the mysterious attacker.

"Vitals?" Simon asked, ever the doctor. Mal read them to the barely conscious medic and followed the young man's instructions without question.

"What happened to your arm?" Simon finally asked, now fully aw

Comments
Sunday, 03 June 2007 06:47
I don't mind the short chapters, because they're chock full of tension! This is getting a might worrisome - I don't think Simon is necesarily in the best shape to entrust anyone's life in his hands. But I guess desperate times call for desperate measures.

And since I love Simon "the father" I will put in a little plea to see him interact with Hobie ... okay, there's my plot bunny!
Sunday, 03 June 2007 10:15
The way you are writing this every letter could have plunged Serenity and her crew into this bloodbath. The only surprised is that they all survived it. Ominous at the end having Zoe tell Simon they need to get ready for the next attack. Don't like the sound of Zoe's stupid father one little bit. The space between that men's head must be pure bone which proves Zoe must take after her mama. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 03 June 2007 18:55
Honestly have to wonder why Zoe's dad has waited this long to get all kinds of physical when dealing with his supposedly wayward daughter? Certainly would have gotten better results had he tried it around the time Mal got Serenity...definitely pre-Jayne's arrival. If it is his work:(

Still...all kinds of brilliant stuff here, kacidilla! Definitely can't wait to see the next chapter:D

BEB
Sunday, 03 June 2007 19:08
I agree with Amdobell, Zoe's father sounds like an ass - I'm guessing he'll turn up at some point in the story?

Nice to see Simon alive and - well, not well, exactly, but ok! The fact that River hasn't woken up yet makes me increasingly worried though, neep! I loved Jayne's letter but I'm having a hard time believing he'd make THAT many spelling mistakes. I dunno, maybe it's just me.

Anyway, I am still intrigued about this story and who's after the crew, and I'm looking forward to finding out more!

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