Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Ich Liebe Dich - Part One

Tuesday, May 29, 2007

Badger sends Serenity on a job to pick up some luxury goods for the rich folk of Persephone. Fic follows on from Alliance vs Serenity, but can be read as standalone. 9th fanfic featuring the usual post BDM characters and a few of my own creation. Grateful thanks to BluedEyedBrigadier for the beta. I need feedback like Serenity needs fuel. Part 1 of 2.

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Serenity took off from Londinium and River effortlessly plotted a course back to Persephone, an enormous weight lifting from her shoulders the farther the ship moved away from the Core planet. She had thought that Bane would blame her for what she had to do, but Bane had barely thought about it. Now that she was free, nothing else mattered to her, and for that River was glad. It still did not take away the guilt, though it went a long way to making her feel better. Mal appeared in the cockpit and sat down in his chair.

“All set?” he asked.

“Should arrive back at the Eavesdown docks tomorrow evening.”

“You gonna stop goin’ missin’ around the ship now she’s back?” River pretended to concentrate on flying the ship, but Mal was not fooled, knowing that River could do several tasks at once, more so than the average woman.

“Reckon so,” she answered stiffly, and she could swear Mal chuckled, but when she whipped her head around he was checking out the switches above him. Zoe came into the cockpit, she was smiling – things were almost right with the ‘Verse again.

“Where to next, Cap’n?” she asked.

“Gotta drop off the Shepherd at Persephone. Might let Bane drop in on her relatives for a few hours. Trouble is I got no jobs lined up ‘cept Bane’s munitions with Monty.”

“We could visit Badger, sir. See if he’s got anything lined up?” Mal was receptive to that idea, it had been a while since they had dealt with him.

Bane was still on a high about being back on Serenity , being back in the Black, hell, just being back. She had promised to tell everyone what had happened at dinner, although she found out that they had watched most of the trial on the cortex. Kaylee had kindly tidied her quarters while she was away – her way of insisting that Bane was always going to come back. The dress she had borrowed for the wedding was folded neatly on the bed. She moved to her desk and immediately saw her journal was there. The last time she had seen it was the night the I.A.V. had come, the night

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Tuesday, 29 May 2007 07:25
Please please post your thoughts as (good or bad) it inspires me to keep writing.
For a quick synopsis of crew members Bane Pye and Karl Jacobsson, see my log.
FIREFLYJO
Tuesday, 29 May 2007 19:50
Excellent as always. Love how you keep expanding on Bane & Karl's character/backgrounds. Waiting for the next part to see how it all turns out :)

Jo
Wednesday, 30 May 2007 02:05
Absolutely positively fabulous work here, hermitsrest! Definitely a brilliant - and hilarious! - cliffie to end on:D

Forgot to mention this in my message back to you when I sent you the beta'd story, but I find it kinda surprising River doesn't already know German. She picks it up rapidly, but I have always gotten the impression River knows or is familiar with pretty much every language where a fragrment or text still exists. Guess it's the whole "child prodigy with an immeasurable IQ" character trait;)

BEB
Wednesday, 30 May 2007 06:57
Thanks for the comments, BEB. It did cross my mind about River knowing German but I felt that a) it's important not to have River as omnipotent and all-knowing, and b) the Deutschlanders are an enclosed society and fought against the Alliance, therefore the Alliance has no interest in a language other than Chinese or English. That was my brief reasoning, anyway.
Wednesday, 30 May 2007 16:32
And it's perfectly reasonable logic, hermitsrest;)

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