Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE
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I’m gonna go with NC-17 on this one. Twice warned, no complaining. Thanks to AgentOmega for the beta.

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Inara washed her face, considering herself in the mirror, running her finger across the apple of her cheek. She was amused to catch herself counting her freckles, the way Mal had the first time he’d seen them. He loved them and she loved that he loved them, though she still kept them covered on a daily basis. Inara bit her lip, stopping the silly counting, and reached for the compact of concealer. She looked at the beige powder, then back at her husband. Just back from a job, he’d been so exhausted, he’d fallen asleep fully clothed, and was still sprawled on top of the covers. He looked so rugged and handsome in that blue, button-down shirt, which would have captured and enhanced the color of his eyes had they been open.

Instinctively, she touched her silk-clad skin, remembering the feel of the soft cotton the morning she’d put on his shirt. She’d promised him at the time that she’d put it on again when he had healed. A few times since, she had remembered the promise and tried pulling on the shirt, but each time he had stopped her, saying only ‘no pretending.’ And though she’d never promised that she’d let him see the freckles again, now as she looked, it seemed unnatural to wear the shirt any other way.

Setting the compact on the vanity unused, she determined that today was the day she’d feel that soft cotton on her skin again, embracing her shoulders. As gentle as the breeze, she glided to the bed, feeling free and wickedly playful. Climbing delicately over him, she began unbuttoning the shirt slowly, enjoying the contented moan that fell out of Mal even as he slept. His body lifted instinctively as she tugged the bottom of the shirt where it had been tucked in. After so many years, he’d grown accustomed to her redressing him in his sleep, and he just kept his eyes closed and enjoyed being pampered. She hoped he didn’t change today, as she wanted this to be a surprise. Pressing his face t

Comments
Sunday, 20 May 2007 01:35
I loved this, it was perfectly wonderful. Such a joy to have some good Mal/Inara and you do it so well! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 20 May 2007 02:03
magnificent! i love reading your works...you always leave me smiling! this was no exception!!
Sunday, 20 May 2007 02:08
Here's to freckles and a good cotton shirt! Very nicely done!
Sunday, 20 May 2007 02:53
This was wonderfully playful and sexy while also being a bit serious too! I love your Mal/Inara and this is just another great one for the record books.
Sunday, 20 May 2007 21:57
You certainly know how to turn a phrase when it comes to making these two all kinds of revved up for one another, valeriebean;)

And now that you've dropped another bomb, you have to clean up the mess: more! We need to see Mal getting all kinds of obsessed about finding out Inara's previous name. Cuz we all know it would drive him nuts to be that close to Inara and still be missing out on knowing something about her;D

BEB
Monday, 21 May 2007 01:24
Oh, yes! See, now you've introduced a mystery and we won't let you get away with just teasing us... Get to writing, Val. Me thinks you have more fluffy smutty goodness to write.

And good lord! The man's like the Energizer Bunny! =^O

Where can I get one? =^D
Monday, 21 May 2007 05:42
(Wipes sweat from forehead)

Apologies for my late review, VB.

That was... wow.

Sweet and fluffy and sexy all rolled into one.

Love Mal's comments when he wakes up to find Inara in the shirt he had just been wearing not 30 seconds ago. That was priceless.

Inara doing the leg-wrapping while Mal is trying to count her freckles was SO not playing fair, but also perfectly in character.

And the bits with the butterfly kisses... whoo-hoo! Ahem. Those were good.

I love Inara's line about pet names - "I never want to say those names again. Only yours." - gah. There are no words for such devotion.

And yes, I agree with the others; since you've established that 'Inara' isn't her original name, you must write a sequel where Mal tries to find out.

As always, most excellent work.

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