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And So It Begins 1/?

Friday, May 18, 2007

Has Inara met her match?

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And So It Begins 1/?

Author: GenesisZia

Rating: G

Disclaimer: I own nothing but my dreams. The rest belongs to Joss Whedon.

Spoilers: Series/BDM

Pairing/Characters: The usual suspects plus one or two of my own creation. Canon with heavy focus on Mal/Inara…eventually (does angst count?)

A.N. It’s roughly set 4 years Post BDM. I’m taking all sorts of liberties concerning certain individuals’ past and backstory. If there is some cannon I am blatantly ignoring or misappropriating, kindly let me know. I anticipate this being a behemoth when all is said in done (I foresee this multipart fic as the first part of a trilogy), so if you care to join me for this ride please hold on and give a holla when it so moves you.

All spelling/grammar issues are my own…..anyone offering their beata-ing services is welcomed.

Lastly this is my first foray into fanfic…any feedback is much appreciated.

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And so it began. A test of wills.

Since most of her life, since adolescence, Inara Serra has had the upper hand. All relationships have their dynamics, but in Inara’s case, all of hers have been decidedly tilted in her favor. She has had control over her life and, for the most extent, those in it. Some may think it is the power Inara is attracted to, but in truth, it is the fear of being dominated that provokes her; she knows better than most what losing the upper hand can mean. She must take a stand.

Inara stared down the petulant eyes across from her. Both subjects stood with lips thinned, left fist slightly clinched, and breathing slowed. Inara was slowly becoming so frazzled by the situation that she failed to notice this similar body language. Then it happened. One of their checks flushed and eyes went misty. Inara’s resolve faltered. For the first time in nearly 12 years, Inara found herself at a loss for a counterattack.

Taken aback, she took a breath. She quickly cleared her thoughts and her throat.

With a firm sigh she realized she could still win this, that

Comments
Friday, 18 May 2007 21:07
This is an interesting start. I think it's great that Inara's match just happens to be her two-year-old daughter.

But who is the father? A certain, roguish, tight-pants-wearing captain, maybehaps?

A few agreement issues (with the grammar), but other than that, pretty easy to read. I'll be interested to read more.
Friday, 18 May 2007 21:27
Hmm. Interesting start. I like that Inara has a stubborn child just like herself - and Mal?

You've certainly got a lot of years to fill in. I hope we get to see (read) them.

Being more of a Simon/Kaylee fan, I hope you spend some time on them as well. Or at least tell us what's happened to them.

Lastly, welcome to the fic world!
Saturday, 19 May 2007 02:24
Not bad for a first fic. Please keep writing! Can't help but wonder where this is going to go!
Saturday, 19 May 2007 02:59
Being the mother of a stubborn two year old, I had to laugh at this one, because the scene is so familiar! Fortunately for me, my little girl doesn't talk yet, and after reading this, I'm not so sure I want her to!! Loved it!
Saturday, 19 May 2007 04:20
Very well written, I must say! I wish the chapter was a little longer, though. I'm wondering where little Zola came from and where Inara's living now? It didn't sound like Serenity. Hmmm... I'm intrigued! Post Ch. 2 very soon, OK?
Saturday, 19 May 2007 11:36
I agree with all the other comments - it's a good start, and I'm intrigued to see how you fill in the gaps... It was a really interesting (and cute) dynamic, Inara's daughter is adorable.

Do hope we get some backstory though, and I second what Leiasky said - more S/K!

Good work - keep it up! :D:D
Sunday, 20 May 2007 19:35
Well now...you've certainly dropped a nice shiny bomb on us, genesiszia. Cuz I really wanna know now who is little Zola's daddy? A roguish but deeply caring ex-army sergeant/transport ship captain? Or is Inara's seemed absence from Serenity because she got pregnant with the child of someone other than Mal's?

And if you need a beta, I would be happy to help out. Though I would advise seeking out a second one for contingency purposes and to make sure you're getting multiple perspectives on the work you're doing. PM if you are interested in my offer;)

BEB

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