Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Alliance vs Serenity - Part Two

Friday, May 18, 2007

The trial begins. Can Mal and the others help her before it’s too late? 8th fanfic featuring the usual post BDM characters and a few of my own creation. Grateful thanks to BluedEyedBrigadier for the beta. I need feedback like Serenity needs fuel. P.S. I’ve probably been watching too much JAG. Part 2 of 2.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2893    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Bane sat in the court room aware of all the cameras. The number of reporters were limited, but there were so many cameras it was like looking at a giant fly. They covered every angle and direction. She tried her best to ignore them, but knew that there were friends and family out there, watching. Her Advocate sat beside her, blocking out a lot of the cameras for which she was grateful. He had all sorts of com pads and written notes on the table they sat at together. The room was also packed with people, most of them in uniform, high-ranking, and giving her ugly stares. In front of her sat the military panel of seven men – all generals. It was their remit to decide her innocence or her guilt.

The Prosecutor stood up and began talking and his speech lasted a full forty-five minutes. She noticed several of the panel were severely bored. She was too, the man was painting her as a crusading terrorist using the war to further her own evil desires, like some wicked witch in a children’s story. Advocate Evensis did not seem bothered by the ranting. When the Prosecutor finally sat down Evensis stood up. His opening speech lasted less than fifteen minutes and Bane began to wish she had a drooling limping monkey for an Advocate.

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Mal walked with Zoe along one of the streets on Boros. He knew she was not happy about all this chasing around he was doing and he wanted to talk to her about it. He had been trying to find the right words for some minutes now.

“You know how we keep dancing to this same tune?” Mal began.

“Sir?” Zoe said, puzzled.

“You know, I tell you the plan. You hate the plan. You make a few suggestions and we change the plan slightly. Or circumstances dictate that we have to make a new plan –“

“I get it, Cap’n,” she said, smiling a little.

“Well. This thing I’ve been doing for Bane.”

“It’s admirable what you’re doing,” said Zoe.

“But?” Mal asked.

“But we can’t possibly take on the Alliance single handed without drawing a whole lot of attention to ourselves, sir. Tho

Comments
Friday, 18 May 2007 12:14
Please please post your thoughts as (good or bad) it inspires me to keep writing.
For a quick synopsis of crew members Bane Pye and Karl Jacobsson, see my log.
Friday, 18 May 2007 14:50
I absolutely loved this to bits, especially Mal pulling out all the stops and Jayne blurting out what he knew in the hopes of maybe helping Bane. In the end that piece of scum Dedham ended up being the one looking at doing time and Bane ending up free! Yay, fabulous work, and liked that last line. Now, what's this with you teaching the crew German for the next chapter? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 20 May 2007 01:57
Oh...the next part will knock your socks off with it's hilarity, AMDOBELL;)

And though I am biased - being the beta for this and all - I have to say this was all kinds of brilliant work here, hermitsrest! You've definitely captured the brilliance of a properly-done courtroom drama here with Bane's defence

Saying that...even with the addition of the part where Evensis recognizes Sheydra as his daughter, I still get the impression his bias should have caused him to recuse himself from the case. Though I doubt any lawyer of any skill practising in the Core would be openly sympathetic to the Independents;)

BEB
FIREFLYJO
Tuesday, 29 May 2007 19:37
Excellent, love your characters, and how well they blend into the Firefly verse.

Jo
Friday, 11 July 2008 14:55
loved it - nice to read about an OC shepherd that doesn't seem like a Book clone.

And all the elements of the drama were very well woven:)

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