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HEAVEN AND HELL: 46. "Catalyst"

Friday, July 30, 2004

"Inara escapes with the Shepherd's help but there is still one last thing she wants from the Captain. River unleashes an unusual attack but the fallout is not exactly what any of them expected."

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TITLE: "CATALYST"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: RIVER/MAL.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: New. SEQUEL to "CRY BABY".

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "Inara escapes with the Shepherd's help but

there is still one last thing she wants from the Captain. River

unleashes an unusual attack but the fallout is not exactly what

any of them expected."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly' are

the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"CATALYST"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

* * * * *

She felt her breath catch as they entered the ship. Shepherd Book immediately went over to the pilot's chair and ran quickly through the pre-ignition sequence, checking the controls and making sure they were clear for take off. Inara was oblivious. She hurried over to where the Captain lay insensate on the floor. Could see where the Shepherd had redressed his leg but the brace had not been reattached. It lay like a bright metallic husk beside him. She noticed how bruised and swollen the bloodied left leg was and understood. Carefully Inara checked him over then rested a hand over his heart and just stared into his face. Had he guessed? If he recovered would he remember? It had been so long ago. She had been so young and he so naive. Still shining with a faith that had no cracks in it. A boy lit up inside with a truth that would one day betray him. No. Better if he did not know. If all the cares of the past slid into oblivion. Let not one of them trouble his waking heart.

Only when the iron grip on her mind had fractured had the memories begun to trickle back through her consciousness. Memories that brought a painful and expensive release. Malcolm Reynolds had been with his father, the market a lively and bustling

Comments
Friday, 30 July 2004 11:04
Oh, that was lovely. Such a moving, beautiful ending. I have so enjoyed reading this story, I feel a bit sad now that it's over.

Inara's story was really painful, made all the more intense by the contrast and parallels with River's.

And as for me thinking I knew what was going on right back in Chapter 1 - hah! Di'n't know a damn thing.
Friday, 30 July 2004 14:20
This was supershiny Alison
I don't know how you managed to juggle and keep all these balls in the air at once.

Im so pleased that our crew is all back together again, wonder where you'll take them next?
Friday, 30 July 2004 15:47
Folks, this is *not* the last part. That will be posted soon. This is the penultimate chapter. The last one is always flagged Conclusion. Thanks for the shiny comments, so much appreciated. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 30 July 2004 16:42
*Not* the last part?! See, just when I think it's safe to breathe again .... gorramit, I'm away next week.... *gnash*
Friday, 30 July 2004 16:44
Felt like it was wrapping to me too, but you have too many dangling plot and character elements yet to go.

"She was quite prepared to hide the bodies if he decided to shoot them." Good line!

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