Blue Sun Room FICTION - SUSPENSE

Orphaned Soul, Part 1

Thursday, July 29, 2004

Inara and Shephard Book try to help a troubled girl who has lost her brother, and perhaps her mind.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 5611    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“Mal, you know those two wouldn't survive a day in Whitefall anyway. You throw them out, I'm leaving too.”

The words echoed in Inara’s mind as she climbed the stairs up from the catwalk, her arm draped protectively over the girl trembling at her side. She had been too slow to save the girl’s brother; too weak to diffuse their fool captain’s misdirected anger over…

No. There was no time for that now. She could not allow herself to mourn Kaylee yet. She had made the young doctor a promise. His face pressed up against the frosted window of the airlock door, he had shouted his own epitaph: “Forget me -- save my sister! Save River --”

“NO!” The girl’s scream pierced the silence of the cargo bay as her trembling gave way to violent convulsions. Biting off a curse for allowing her discipline to slip, Inara half-led, half-dragged her wild-eyed young charge the final few steps up to the landing where Shephard Book stood watching over them, his jaw set with a determination that mirrored her own.

River had lapsed back into semi-consciousness and Inara closed her eyes a moment in relief. As Book carried the troubled girl into her shuttle, Inara fought down the instinct to look back at the ship that had been her home…or at the man she had shared it with.

As she stepped into her shuttle, Inara glanced from the sleeping girl to the greying preacher confidently working the shuttle’s controls. Closing the door behind her, she let out the breath that she had been holding for what felt like hours and sank slowly into the cold curve of the bulkhead.

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ANONYMOUS
Friday, 30 July 2004 02:43
Wow, good stuff.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 30 July 2004 17:31
There absolutely needs to be more of this, Shiny.
Friday, 30 July 2004 18:09
Thanks anonymous1 and anonymous2! ;) I've posted the second installment here:

http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=1632
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 30 July 2004 23:28
Wow! I read a lot of the FacFic and I have to say that this is the first time I got the shivers and had the hair on my arms stand up. Give us more!!!
Tuesday, 11 January 2005 19:40
Whoah... Great story! I want to read more now!

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