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Ships in the Night - Part Two

Sunday, April 22, 2007

Having crash landed on St Albans, Inara and her friend are lost in the snow. Can Mal and the crew find them before it is too late? 5th fanfic featuring the usual post BDM characters and a few of my own creation. Constructive criticism and feedback is always welcome. Part 2/3.

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River sat up suddenly with a gasp. She looked around her purposefully and over the sleeping bodies; Kaylee cuddled up to Simon, Bane sandwiched between Karl and Jayne, then Zoe, and finally the person she needed – Mal. She got up and stepped over the bodies without making a sound. She knelt beside Mal and starred at him. She had been about to reach out and touch his shoulder when he came awake abruptly, making her jump. Mal started himself when he realised River was hovering over him. He rubbed an eye sleepily and looked at her expectantly.

“Inara’s in the snow,” she said in a normal voice. It was all she needed to say to make Mal react. Now he understood why he had that funny feeling in his gut all night, he did not know how, but she was out there and she needed help. He unravelled himself from the furs and got up, pulling up his braces. Zoe opened her eyes, she always slept lightly.

“What is it?” she asked.

“River conjures Inara is one of those out in the snow,” explained Mal. Zoe did not question him or doubt River’s abilities, but she thought it was very remote that Inara would still be alive. It had been at least eight or nine hours since they had first been informed of the distress call. But she also knew Mal’s irrational and complicated feelings about the woman and was not about to stop him looking for her.

Serenity would be too big to navigate these mountains – better take the shuttles,” she suggested in a confident voice. Mal was relieved that Zoe was in his corner on this one, as he had expected her to object. The others were already starting to stir. Mal kindly shoved another couple of logs onto the fire for the Smiths and then turned around to speak to the crew, who were in various states of grogginess.

“Seems there may be someone alive on that downed ship and we’re going looking for them. We’re taking both shuttles. Bane, you pilot shuttle two. Karl, you and Jayne go with her. Simon, you likely need to get the Med Bay prepped and Kaylee, you need to help us dock

Comments
Sunday, 22 April 2007 18:37
Please please post your thoughts as (good or bad) it inspires me to keep writing.
[Hoperules - I've got a message twice now that you've posted a comment but it doesn't seem to be coming through!! Would love to have your input.]
Will be putting part 3 up soon...
Sunday, 22 April 2007 22:58
Loved this, especially how it ended with Mal and Inara holding hands and sharing a moment with each other. I hope neither of them says or does anything stupid to prevent them being able to have a relationship. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
EPM0001
Sunday, 22 April 2007 23:44
I am really enjoying your series. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Monday, 23 April 2007 02:31
What is it about Companions attracting the attentions of handsome and roguish smugglers? Cuz Inara's got Mal wrapped around her fancy digits and Jayne is like a puppy now with his mistress concerning Sheydra;D

A brilliant chapter here, hermitsrest! Definitely loved the slow-build tension and suspense of the rescue, and the shock moments from Mal, Jayne and Karl about stripping Inara and Sheydra before wrapping them in their bodies and clothes were quite humorous - if morbid - as well;)

BEB
Monday, 23 April 2007 16:31
For newcomers to my fics, here is a brief synopsis of my other Serenity crew members.
Bane Pye: First contact with Serenity shortly after BDM when Mal contracts her for a heist (Hun Dan). Doesn’t get taken on as crew until the following year (Humped). Like Mal and Zoe she fought in the war but did anonymous sabotage work blowing up Alliance facilities with her mother. She can conjure up an alias as sure as breath. She can also conjure up a bomb in the same way.
Karl Jacobsson: Signed on to Serenity in November 2518, after Hun Dan. Skills: Gun-hand and muscle like Jayne. Criminal past like Jayne. You can imagine why they get on so well. Karl does think about the bigger picture more and after Ghosts in the Past, he has a major secret of his own revealed.
My stories lean to seeing Serenity and the crew through Bane’s eyes but there is still plenty on our BDHs – otherwise I wouldn’t be doing this!

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