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Wish I Was Somebody Else, 24/26

Wednesday, April 11, 2007

Zoe gets medieval.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4489    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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24. The Highlight of This Little Adventure

You’re thinking about him, aren’t you?

Zoe had never lacked for cause against the Alliance. All her life, they had murdered and destroyed everyone and everything that was dear to her – her family, her home, her comrades-in-arms, her friends – in the name of imposing their vision of civilization on every living being in the ‘verse.

The police post grew larger in the shuttle’s front window, coming up fast. The hails from the station became increasingly frantic. No one in the shuttle spoke.

No, I –

She’d been shot plenty of times. Knifed, more than a few. Patched up, put back together, made almost as good as new; all the wounds in her body just a temporary thing – a lingering stiffness, a persistent ache, but those faded, over time.

Kaylee had rigged an explosive charge on the end of a strut, and bolted it to the nose of the shuttle. It put about two meters of clearance between them and the blast. Which was better than nothing.

Yes, you.

All Zoe’s life, it seemed sometimes, had been a matter of contenting herself with the fact that what she had was better than nothing.

Everyone in the shuttle moved to the back. They were about to hit.

I don’t like having this between us.

She and Wash had built something, out of nothing, out here in the black. Something worth having; something that really was better than nothing. It must have just galled the Alliance, just stuck in their craw, that somebody would dare to have something they hadn’t put their stamp of approval on; somebody would dare to be happy in a way not approved by parliament.

They had braced for impact; their weapons carefully stowed so that no one was injured as they were thrown together. Kaylee’s explosive blasted a hole in the station’s hull, and the shuttle rammed through and plugged it. Still, they had to move quickly. Mal activated the bomb Kaylee had built. It would destroy the shuttle and a chunk of the police post

Comments
MACKON
Wednesday, 11 April 2007 18:28
Nasty.
Wednesday, 11 April 2007 18:51
Does that mean you didn't like it?
Wednesday, 11 April 2007 20:07
This was really good. Were the italic words a conversation between Zoe and Wash? I'm not sure if I recognize them.

I'm so glad Wash got away in time. But now Coles has destroyed the evidence that he caught the crew of Serenity. Or did they put the bodies on their ship before the blew up the Lemon?
Wednesday, 11 April 2007 20:27
Coles picked up the envelope; go back and look. Yeah, the italics were their conversation from a few chapters back. Thirteen? I think. If I could have posted the blamed thing faster you might have remembered it :-(
Wednesday, 11 April 2007 23:22
Great job, I loved imagining the looks on the faces of those *hundan* in the outpost and the fear engendered by the thought of being attacked by Reavers. Can't wait for the next part. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 11 April 2007 23:25
Omg that was AWESOME That was probably your best chapter I loved the whole flashing back to her convo with Wash. It had a movie-type feel that I LOVEDD


That nerdy hat
MACKON
Thursday, 12 April 2007 23:12
Nope! Sorry for the short comment I was on my way out when I stopped to read something, so I was running late. The nasty comment was the first thing that popped into my head, A bloody nasty fight with Zoe boiling with anger. It was great as an aside I enjoyed the slick shuffle with the shuttles they lose one and Wash finds one, cool.
Friday, 13 April 2007 00:22
Thanks!

You're very perceptive re: the shuttles.
Saturday, 14 April 2007 22:12
I went back and re-read those chapters. The one that had their convorsation in it, and the last one. I just couldn't remember the convorsation, it seemed familiar, but I couldn't quite grasp where I'd read it. And i remember Coles picking up the envolope, I realized that after I posted my comment.
Sunday, 15 April 2007 17:04
Damn...it's actually scarier to be "on-board" Zoe as she actually takes on the Reaver mantle, but with clear thoughts. No overpowering rage, no magnified drive to feed and reproduce...just pure, cold fury at all the Alliance has done to her and her loved ones.

Really can't wait for the last two chapters, cuz I KNOW they're gonna be humdingers!

BEB
Friday, 20 February 2015 03:26
Sorry this is honestly my favourite fic ever and I'm so glad I found it but I'm really sad I was too young for Firefly in 2007 because I would have LOVED seeing this being updated chapter by chapter and wow

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