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Wish I Was Somebody Else, 23/26

Monday, April 9, 2007

The Alliance is about to catch a Firefly; Mal makes a last-ditch effort to save his missing crewman.

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23. Well, There Goes Plan A

Kaylee screamed when she saw them – a wail of genuine terror.

“Kaylee,” Mal said. Her name was one of the few things he could say clearly, with his face so mutilated.

Recognizing his voice, Kaylee said quiveringly, “Captain?”

“Ready?” Mal asked.

Kaylee nodded. “Everything just like you said, Cap’n. Fifteen minute timer. But, why -- ?” Whatever she had been meaning to ask, she didn’t, as Serenity’s reaver assault team advanced on her. She retreated, whimpering, with both hands almost covering her face.

Mal, Zoe, Jayne and River, armed with the knives, hatchets, and clubs River had gathered, plus some clandestine firearms, and wearing clothes deliberately torn and liberally decorated with blood that Simon had been carefully storing up against their frequent medical needs, climbed aboard the shuttle and waited for Inara’s word.

Her voice came over the speaker. “Mal. It’s not too late to rethink this.”

“Just count,” Mal said. He was having to choose his words more carefully than usual; any phoneme that required his lips to move was impossible right now.

“Closest approach in five . . . four . . . three . . . two . . . one,” Inara said, and as the shuttle disengaged, she added “Come back. All of you.”

“Ain’t that sweet?” Jayne grunted.

**

“Are we close enough for a firing solution?” Coles asked.

“Not yet,” came the answer.

“Fire a warning shot when we are,” he said, watching the little transport draw slowly closer.

Assuming the ship he was about to board was the decoy, where was Serenity? Close by, or long gone? And why weren’t the two ships traveling together? If Reynolds had had some warning of Coles’s approach, surely he would not have left behind the man – Washburne? – who was flying this ship. Reynolds wasn’t the sort to leave a man behind, as he had so often proved. If Reynolds was gone, then where? And why?

Comments
Monday, 09 April 2007 21:41
Hmm, this is really gripping. Can't wait to see what happens next. Wash is my hero! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 09 April 2007 21:58
Ah! I was away all weekend without a computer and I was like "Oh no! I'm missing my story!!" I'm so glad this didn't go too far ahead without me.

Poor Kaylee, she must have been to freaken terrified when she say them all Reaver-ified. I would have been.
Wash is so clever, I definately wouldn't have thought of that. He would totatly be my hero if it wasn't already some random kid in gr.5 at my old school (long story).
Tuesday, 10 April 2007 07:37
oooh. amazing. absolutely loving this story.
Saturday, 14 April 2007 21:02
Hmm...Wash as Odyessues. ..now why does that give me a positively sinful idea for a tale?

;D

Still...this is some amazing work here, nauticalgal! Between Wash's skillful piloting of the "Lemon" to the faux Reaver attack to the final bit with Wash managing to get the port shuttle released...I was in awe! Definitely can't wait to see how Coles reacts when he gets told of the supposed Reaver assault;)

BEB

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