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Wish I Was Somebody Else, 22/26

Friday, April 6, 2007

In this chapter: the Big Damn Plan falls completely to pieces.

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AN: There's more than one way to name a very small planet; I've used Isaac Asimov's terminology because I thought it appropriate.

22. If Everybody Could Just Be Quiet a Minute

Serenity quickly outdistanced the obdurate Lemon, in spite of Wash’s efforts, cutting everything except his own wrists in an effort to coax more speed from her. River kept a close eye on the upgraded scanners Kaylee had installed, and wished that Mal would calm down a little bit. His bad case of nerves was making her jittery.

“Passing the lawforce post,” River reported, and Mal looked over her shoulder at the screen. The free-floating police station was the only permanent Alliance presence in this area. Shouldn’t be a problem. Probably didn’t have much in the way of resources; just a small patrol cruiser docked alongside, total personnel complement of maybe a dozen officers and supporting crew.

“Just keep us out of sight,” Mal said, and River nodded.

Not far beyond the lawforce post was a small, undeveloped mesoplanet. Mal pointed it out to River. It was plenty large enough to hide an Alliance destroyer.

“I see it,” River said. “But I have no way to see through it.”

“Go around it,” Mal said. “I want to know there’s nothing back there.” So River altered course and slewed them around the rocky world. They found nothing beyond it but the usual vasty nothingness. Mal stood in the middle of the bridge and stared into the reassuringly empty black.

As they came around the far side, though, a telltale lit on the pilot’s console. “Captain! Polyphemus!” River cried.

“Where?” Mal was at one shoulder in an instant; Zoe hovered anxiously over the other.

“Behind Wash. I think they’ve spotted him, sir; they’re altering course and accelerating to intercept.”

“Nee ta ma duh tyen-shia suo-yo duh run doh gai si.” Mal hit the comm. “Wash, you’ve got company.”

“Where? I don’t see ‘em.”

“Alliance destroyer Polyphemus, with our friend Coles. Coming

Comments
Friday, 06 April 2007 17:18
le gasp! Wash is going to get away right!? RIGHT!?
That's really creepy, Simon maikn' them all look Reaverish. Ew.

I hope they're all going to be all right. This story is most definately not good for my nerves.
Friday, 06 April 2007 18:32
Joss killed Wash. How could I do less?

Saturday, 07 April 2007 04:03
Cruel, Nauti, cruel...

...but then, when does Joss ever do the same thing twice?

Or, for that matter, when does he do exactly what we expect him to do?

Never mind, absolutely LOVING this story, more soon please, pretty please with strawberries on it?

<g>
Saturday, 07 April 2007 21:42
that first sentece, "Serenity quickly outdistanced the obdurate Lemon, in spite of Wash’s efforts, cutting everything except his own wrists in an effort to coax more speed from her", was great. I liked the rest of it too, but that sentence structure really sticks out in my mind.
MACKON
Monday, 09 April 2007 03:14
Howdy enjoying your story alot. Would you mind if I based a story of my own with yours as base. Ive been thinking of doing a Firefly story for sometime as a break from my BattlestarFarscape crossover. But I wouldn't enjoy writting it as much with out Wash. Just an Idea at the moment, I may get back to my other stuff and never put pen to paper about the verse, but if I do I would like to be cannon and still have Wash in the mix.
Monday, 09 April 2007 04:33
Mackon, I would be thrilled if you did!
MACKON
Monday, 09 April 2007 10:15
Thanks Nauticalgal I'll be sure to give you full credit and a link to your brilliant story.
Monday, 09 April 2007 12:54
Um, if there's a way out of this where you get to keep writing Wash along with the rest, could you urge your muse fast burn in that direction? It'd be a service to the readership, eh?

Well done, scary monsters and all.
Friday, 13 April 2007 00:58
Oh...now this is just utterly Whedonesque in its completely insane but cunning plan, nauticalgal! Cuz it's only one step up from decorating Serenity like a Reaver vessel to disguising the crew as Reavers to fool the Alliance...

Write more and faster! We need to find out if Wash survives being chased and if the Plan B works right;)

BEB
Friday, 13 April 2007 03:35
Actually, it was already written before I started posting, but it takes me time to copy it and fix all the formatting.

Wash's fate is already determined, and was from the start.

Glad you liked!
Sunday, 22 May 2011 03:55
Insane plan, coming right up.

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