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Valley of the Shadow - Ch 4

Thursday, April 5, 2007

Reunited and on the run, the crew seeks to finish the job they started. Though with their guide dead, the easy route becomes perilous … Dowload the full PDF <a href="http://www.valeriebean.com/writings/fireflyfic/"here</a>… A.N.: Post-BDM, sequel to <a href="http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15881"‘Three Strand Cord’</a>…Ch 4: Crew seeks safe harbor

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CHAPTER 4

River moaned like a tired child when Zoë set her down on the Infirmary bed. Simon rushed quickly to splint River’s broken hand, but Zoë’s thoughts were elsewhere.

“River, honey, can you tell me where we are?”

“We’re on a ship. Mid-bulk transport—”

“Where in the ‘verse, River?” Zoë interrupted. “What world are we near?”

“Close to home.”

Zoë furrowed her brow. River’s home was Osiris – a core planet, and nowhere close to here. Still, Mal must have oriented himself. The ship shuddered and swayed as they entered atmo and set down. She was concerned about the lack of fancy flying, wondering if Mal had found them a crater or some place to hide, because setting on the open range would be suicide. Her heart pounded when she heard the back door open, and she ran out of the Infirmary, drawing her shotgun.

The cool autumn air swept through the cargo bay, carrying the smell of manure and hay. The room filled with the echoes of mooing cattle, triggering memories of a time when the cargo hold was full of those smelly animals. The sun gleamed through the back door, blinding Zoë, casting Mal into silhouette. Stealthily, she crept sideways around the bay, angling away from the sun until she could see outside.

From her view behind the aft bulkhead, Zoë could see a half dozen ranchers, all with long barrel shotguns aimed at Mal. She could only imagine that the circle extended around the whole back door. Qian Chung loyals, she assumed, watching Mal’s every move. He had one hand shielding his eyes in his typical “don’t shoot me, I’m no one of consequence” posture.

“You best stay on that boat and turn back to the black you came from!” one of the ranchers bellowed in the deep, strong voice of a foreman

“Dekker?” Mal hollered, squinting and leaning forward. A shot fired, grazing Mal’s arm. Instinctively, Zoë tackled Mal to the ground and aimed her weapon, but Mal stayed her hand. Staying down, out of the line of fire, Zoë watched as Mal stood, brushed off his coat, and addressed Dekker again.

“Sorry

Comments
Thursday, 05 April 2007 18:17
Ah lovely, if you can't run to family when bad things are on your tail who can you run to? Lovely job. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 05 April 2007 18:28
I like the 'idea' of this story but you're just not giving us much information at all so its really difficult to follow. The chapters are really short. And, really, after a story + 4 parts, we should already know what went on between Simon and Kaylee.

How long he's been gone, where are the Simon and River scenes? They're so close in the series. What has changed? Give us more info and flesh everything out a bit more.
Thursday, 12 April 2007 21:05
I have to agree with Leiasky here, valeriebean. I have been hoping for a little while now that we would be getting a lot more information about what happened in the 8 years Zoe was off the ship, especially why Simon and Kaylee split up. And it certainly isn't abated when you seem to be giving us clues that Kaylee's been restrained and assaulted in her past but can't remember the incident...except that Simon was somehow involved:(

And while I like the specific fact you had the BDHs take shelter with Mal's mother on the family ranch...I guess I am more of the camp that feels the Ballad of Serenity can be applied to Mal's life, in that Shadow uninhabitable for one reason or another. Makes for interesting emotional baggage for Mal to only have Serenity as a home.

BEB

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