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Prairie Run - Part Two

Tuesday, April 3, 2007

Serenity's been hijacked with Simon on board. How will the crew survive? 3rd fanfic featuring the usual post BDM characters and a few of my own creation. Constructive criticism or comments are always welcome. Part 2 of 2.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3098    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“You better not have thrown our cure out that door, doc, or I’m shootin’ you here and now.” Simon did not confirm anything, particularly as the gun was pointed barely two inches from his nose. Actually he was pretty certain that whatever this Captain and crew had, the cure had gone out of the bay door, but he was not about to give himself a death sentence either.

“You will have to let me examine you to find that out,” he replied. The Captain shouted to another member of his crew and pushed the doctor forward.

“Jesse! Go with the doc and let him find out what those shee-niou settlers gave us.” Jesse also pushed Simon roughly and he led him to the Med Bay. In the time it had taken for him to walk up the ramp and for them to close it, Simon had been able to diagnose the disease. Tiny red spots at first, profuse sweating; it had to be Fingal’s plague. It was a quick and deadly disease that affected most newly settled planets and formed part of the standard settler inoculation pack. He had examined most of the colonists that Serenity had transported, they had all had their compulsory shots, which would have included one for Fingal’s plague. As spacers it was pure stupidity for this crew not to have had their inoculations. However, in those brief moments before the ramp closed, he had remembered with horror that Kaylee had not been up-to-date with her jabs, having a dislike of needles, and she had a terribly persuasive way of making him change the subject. That was what had made him throw the bag out of the closing ramp.

He made a show of examining Jesse carefully, but there really was no doubt. They were still in the early stages, which meant that they had only been exposed for about a day. By this evening they would likely lapse into comas. The unconscious part was the unpredictable bit about the disease, sometimes it lasted days and for others, hours, depending on how strong they were. The antidote could be administered at any time to provide a full recovery. After the unconscious stage

Comments
Tuesday, 03 April 2007 11:40
Absolutely loved this and I hope there will be a moment or time in the future when we get to see Mal thank Simon properly for his quick thinking - both in throwing his medicine bag off the ship when he was taken and in what he did to ensure the crew that nabbed him didn't make it and he got Serenity back. He really used his Top Three Per Cent in this one. Loved everybody's reactions and so felt for Mal over the believed loss of his ship, his soul. Hope we get lots more of these stories, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 04 April 2007 01:41
Awesome, loved Simon hiding then poping back out.
Friday, 06 April 2007 05:43
Some utterly fabulous work here, hermitsrest! Definitely gotta give you props for managing to find a way for Chapter 1 to say true...but also have Simon survive and get Serenity back to Kerry;D

Gotta ask though...does Mal's thoughts in the last part of the chapter mean Inara's gonna be coming back into the fold? Cuz I know I have been missing her like nuts in all this;D

BEB

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