Serenity had touched down on Orlican an hour ago and Mal, Wash, Zoe and Jayne were getting ready to take the goods they had transported for badger to his client. Since they had spent so much time in the ship on there voyage here, they had decided to take a few days off in port. Mal, Jayne, Wash and Zoe were just finishing putting the last of the cargo on the mule and Kaylee was saying goodbye to Inara.
« Bey nara' »
« Bey mei-mei, stay out of trouble now. »
« Alright, practice safe sex. »
« you too. »
The two laughed, and kissed each other on the cheeks. Inara walked into her shuttle closed the hatchway.
« If the walls of that there shuttle could talk, what stories they would have. » said Jayne, leaning on the mule and staring at the closed doorway.
« I think they'd have a French accent. » said Wash.
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Kaylee walked into the dinning area to find Simon sitting in front of a wave-box typing on its numerous keys.
« Whatcha' doin' sweety. » said Kaylee, trying to read over Simons shoulder.
« I'm trying to get in touch with a old friend from college. He was a brain surgeon and spycoligist specialist and I'm trying to find out if he'd take a look at River for me. »
« What's his name? »
« Jailwen Kwaad, but everyone called him Jay »
« Can you trust him? »
« I think so, he owes me a few. I once got him out of jail for indecent public exposure. »
Kaylee laughed and kissed Simon on the cheek. She still couldn't believe that they had gotten together. He had always seemed to uptight when they weren't officially dating but when they were alone together he was actually very sweet and mellow, even a little funny. He said it was because the pressure of impressing her was off him a little.
« I never knew that the world of medicine had such a seedy underbelly. »
« Oh, you'd be surprised what we get up to. »
They started to kiss but, unfortunately, the wave-box signaled a incoming message. Simon broke off and ope
You can't take the sky from me
My advice? Ask around here for a beta reader. I think you got a great story idea here, MarchingBand...but it's getting buried under a large amount of roughness.
BEB
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