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HELLBOUND Series: 6. "Waiting"

Monday, March 26, 2007

"Meanwhile on Serenity the crew is tense as they head for the Argent Penal Colony."

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TITLE: "WAITING"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No pairing.

RATING: G.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "NOT SO GILDED CAGE"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://unilelu.net/Alison/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "Meanwhile on Serenity the crew is tense as

they head for the Argent Penal Colony."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"WAITING"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

* * * * *

It seemed such a long way out but at least they were moving. In flight. Yet Zoe couldn't sit still, nor stand still neither. Although Wash understood it was quietly driving him nuts. "*Bao bei*, you should try to rest. It's a couple of days to Argent."

That was another thing that bothered her. How come the Shepherd knew so much about the Alliance? The amount of detail he had given about the Argent Penal Colony had chilled her. She knew the others were curious too but not in the same gut wrenching way she was. Then there was the fact that along the way they would need to refuel. With no job to speak of it would be tight making the coin they had left stretch that far. Just one more worry to add to a bag full of sorrow. Didn't bear thinking about the weight.

"*Fengmi*? You even listenin' to me?"

Zoe mentally shook herself out of her fugue. It wasn't Wash's fault she was wired tight enough to snap. Had to relax. Take the long view. But the best part of a lifetime of memories made that a hard thing to do. It wasn't like they were leaving Mal behind just the opposite. But every passing hour made her more anxious that they just weren't moving quickly enough. Time was their enemy not their friend. She put a hand on Wash's shoulder, felt his tension ease a mite at the familiar and welcome touch. Truth be tol

Comments
Monday, 26 March 2007 20:49
Love Simon's introspection at the end. So wonderful. And while I understand Wash's need to try and prepare Zoe for the worst, he's got to know she won't be able to accept the Captain's death ... possibly ever.

Brilliant and sad!
Tuesday, 27 March 2007 05:44
Sorry I haven't commented on the previous chapters yet.

I thought this was really good. I was especially touched by Wash's talk with Zoe. It seems like kind of a role reversal for Wash to be trying to prepare Zoe for the worst, but in this situation it was very fitting. It really made me feel for them both as well.

Seeing their love and concern for Mal makes me hurt for the captain even more.

One thing I've been wondering (and forgive me if there's a line I've missed along the way) is how come Mal was shipped off to this awful place without even a sham trial?
Tuesday, 27 March 2007 20:40
You're not the only one wondering about that, jetflair. I know I have wondered why Jayne ain't right there beside Mal...he's bound to have a laundry list just as long as Mal's full of naughty behaviour:(

And I gotta say your skill with the cursor and keyboard really shone through here, Ali. Between Wash trying to prepare Zoe for the possibility that Mal is already dead (or close to), and Jayne's verbal assault on Inara? Honestly thought I was reading an episode transcript;D

BEB
Tuesday, 27 March 2007 20:44
There is a reason Mal got picked out for special consideration which will become obvious as the story continues to unfold but the sharp eyed might have picked up a clue. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me

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