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Three Strand Cord - Prologue

Wednesday, March 21, 2007

Eight years after Miranda, the crew reunites for an easy job... yeah, right. If there's one thing that never changes, it's Mal's propensity for exchanging unkind words and unkind bullets. This drama reflects on the power of family and friendship. Though one may be overpowered, two can defend themselves. A cord of three strands is not quickly broken... Dowload the full PDF <a href="http://www.valeriebean.com/writings/fireflyfic/"here</a>... A.N. Prologue: Zoë gets a letter from Mal with an interesting proposition. Character pairings: M/I, S/K, K/OC, R/OC (but not in a smutty way)

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“Though one may be overpowered, two can defend themselves. A cord of three strands is not quickly broken.” –Ecclesiastes 4:12

PROLOGUE

(Taking place 8-years post-BDM.)

Zoë closed her eyes. She was on a dusty planet. The day was bright outside of her clay home and the wind brought a breeze off the grasslands. Gazelles grazed along the distant highlands. She hung laundry on a clothesline just outside the back door. She could have a machine dried them, but the sunshine always seemed to leave a fresh kiss on the linens. The house was quiet and vacant and she enjoyed the peace of the afternoon. Planet-side always held a quaint, simplistic feel and though she was happy, her heart yearned for the days spent out in the black chasing ghosts with Captain Reynolds.

“Mommy! Mommy!” The excited cries of her nearly-eight-year-old son broke the silence. He was dashing out of the grasslands, the tall blades slapping his face.

“Hey, baby, what did you find?”

“Look!” He showed her his left forearm which was bleeding. “I got bit!”

The little boy seemed more pleased than concerned.

‘And why shouldn’t he?’ she thought. ‘It’s his world.’

But Zoë was concerned. She grabbed a washcloth from the clothesline, hoping to get a closer look at the wound.

“Do you know what bit you, baby?” she asked with practiced calm.

“This!” he smiled gleefully, pulling a snake from behind his back. Zoë smiled, recognizing the rubber snake joke. When the snake coiled and hissed at her, she jumped backward in surprise. Her son still smiled.

“This is the one that got me, Mommy,” he said, triumphantly. “Can I keep him?”

“No, baby, put him down.”

The boy tossed the snake a few feet away and it slithered off into the grasslands.

“Where’s he off to, Mommy?”

“I expect he’s got family of his own to see to.”

Zoë could tell by the colors of the snake that it wasn’t poisonous, so she picked up her boy and carried him to the kitchen where she could properly bandage the wound. As she cleaned it, she looked him over. He had her dar

Comments
Wednesday, 21 March 2007 03:09
Very well done!

I can certainly see Zoe teaching her son to shoot. But he won't be able to defend himself if he decides to smuggle a snake on board Serenity!

I wonder where Jayne went? He probably elected not to stay around, since there wasn't an overabundance of thieving or coin. I wonder if he's missed (or if he misses them).

These "later on" fics really get me, where the gang has been broken up. It's almost as bad as being canceled.

Looking forward to reading more of your excellent writing,

~MG
Wednesday, 21 March 2007 03:43
I'm sucker for these post-post Miranda fics, especially the reunion ones.

This one has all kinds of possibilities.

By the way, I just finished "Big Damn Rescue" and enjoyed it...although it did get a tad bit dark at times...but then I kinda like that.
Wednesday, 21 March 2007 04:51
Ohhhhh man!!! This one is bringing back memories, soon as I read the beginnings of the break up... I KNOW I had a love/hate relationship with that one, but *shrugs* so far I like this one a bit better, simply cause it seems the gangs all with the gettin' back togather bit, all shiney like =S
Wednesday, 21 March 2007 08:02
Good work! I loved the mental image of River telling bedtime stories that "scare the snot" out of the kids. And I'm pretty sure Zoe's gonna have something to say to Mal about ordering dinner when he gets there.

If anybody believes that this job is going to go smooth and easy, I've got a bridge for sale...
Wednesday, 21 March 2007 10:38
Excellent, loved this prologue and I am almost as eager as Zoe to get back into the Black again! I love how she has been living vicariously through his letters and love that he never once forgot about her or stopped sending money back to help. That's a real friend. I hope we do get to see Jayne, unless of course he ran off with Simon? It's hard to imagine Simon ever leaving River but I imagine that is something that will be explained as the story unfolds. Also, Mal and crew are going to be mighty hungry if they're waiting for Zoe to cook them a meal! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 21 March 2007 20:00
Huh...guessing that I gotta read "Big Damn Rescue" to understand what the name of all that's holy is going on, huh valeriebean? Cuz I will...been a while since I have explored your stuff and I am quite interested in re-immersing myself;D

And I sooo wanna see how Zoe playfully berates Mal for his food request;)

BEB
CALGARYBROWNCOAT
Friday, 23 March 2007 05:22
Hi Valeriebean,

Gotta say I love this story so far... but is your website not working? I've tried going on there, but no dice. I want to read other things you've written...
CALGARYBROWNCOAT
Friday, 23 March 2007 05:25
Never mind... it's working now... and I'm going to be busy reading!

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