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The Find (pt 6)

Friday, July 23, 2004

The crew of Serenity, nearly broke and out of fuel again, are contracted by a mysterious organization to investigate an unknown find in interstellar space. Inara confronts her Guild past and Jayne will see how far he is willing to go to save one of his crew

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2309    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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The Ride Is Half the Fun

Kaylee tossed and turned in her hammock. Without the usual engine noise from Serenity’s old drive, she could not sleep. The usual grinding hum was replaced by the near noiseless drive. She popped up and sat with her feet hanging off the side of the hammock and glanced at the ship’s chronometer. It was 4 AM ship time. She walked down the corridor to the galley past the other crew cabins and knew that they were asleep. Kaylee tussled her hair and went into the dining room where there was an apple left on the table. She brought it up to her nose and smelled it when she heard a slight noise in the cargo bay. Curious, Kaylee walked to the center of the ship.

At the first glance of the huge man nearly naked, Kaylee started. There was Ian wearing only a small set of tight-fitting underwear. She quietly sat on the catwalk and watched. Ian was a giant man and had all the muscle of a modern bodybuilder. He was performing some kind of martial arts routine across the floor of the cargo bay. Kaylee was mesmerized at the absolute precision, power and fluidity his movements. She could now make out all seven feet of his height and she could tell he was a huge man even from fifteen feet above.

Ian’s movements became more dramatic and acrobatic. The speed of the movements increased so that Kaylee could only make out blurs for his hands and feet. Light sweat glistened across his tanned skin, now stretched with his expanding muscles. Kaylee bit into the apple and felt the sweet juices invade her mouth. His movements were very rapid now and his flowing actions became more and more smooth. Kaylee heard the soft crunch of her apple when the voice startled her.

“Incredible isn’t he,” Inara’s soft voice sounded in Kaylee’s ear.

“Ohh,” Kaylee jumped, “you scared me. Yeah I have never seen anyone like this. Look at that!”

Inara sat next to Kaylee, leaning on one hand, “Yes he is very special.”

“Kinda sexy too,” whispered Kaylee with an impish grin.

Inara did not answer but looked at Ian’s dynami

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 23 July 2004 03:26
Thought you said you were never going to use dividers.
Good story, though I did not think that they had FTL drives in the Firefly universe. Look forward to the next episode.
-HowardRoarkLaughed
SAGE1066
Friday, 23 July 2004 06:47
Not sure about the drives, but it would seem necessary for them to cover the distancs between planetary systems. I am not sure how faw away Persephone is from say, Mishka's space station, but somehow they got off Earth. Seeing that the nearest possible planetary system to earth ( about 10 or so light years) is a a couple of light years at least, FTL would seem required. I am not sure if anything were mentioned either way on the series.
IGNUSDEI
Friday, 23 July 2004 06:47
my gripe with this fanfic is that the lines of dialogue feel...akward, somehow.

otherwise, it's real good.
Friday, 23 July 2004 16:07
Good idea, pulsing the lasers, but best I recall the wing engines are air-breathers, so no chance of a crazy Ivan in space. Still an interesting story. Can't wait to see what's next!
Friday, 23 July 2004 16:52
Very much enjoying this, most exciting. Getting more and more curious about Ian and his little *gifts*. I have to wonder if he has a more intimate connection with the collosal ship he is getting Mal and co to take him to find. Shiny, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
SAGE1066
Friday, 23 July 2004 19:30
I think an Ivan would be more possible in space than in atmo. I am certain Serenity has control thrusters on her somewhere. I must admit that these questions have me more and more curious about the Firefly technology. Any official resources?

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