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The Find (pt 2&3)

Tuesday, July 20, 2004

The crew of Serenity, nearly broke and out of fuel again, are contracted by a mysterious organization to investigate an unknown find in interstellar space. Inara confronts her Guild past and Jayne will see how far he is willing to go to save one of his crew.

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A JOB

Wash was approaching the dock cautiously. He often did when it was an unfamiliar space dock. Acre Space Station was new to them all. It was a deep space facility that consisted mostly of research scientists and engineers. Acre specialized in propulsion systems and had made some of the greatest leaps in interstellar propulsion in the past 50 years. Kaylee was bouncing up and down on her toes, hardly able to conceal her excitement. The cockpit was crowded and it was easy to see Wash did not appreciate all the spectators.

“What a nice lookin’ place,” Jayne said.

“Isn’t it beautiful,” Kaylee said, almost to herself. “OHHHHHH, ohhhhh LOOK!”

“AHHHH, WHAT,” Wash said loudly, “don’t do that, please, I am trying to drive here!”

“Oh sorry,” Kaylee hunched her shoulders and bit her lip, then smiled, “Did you see that Sirius Class with the strange engines parked round back? Wasn’t that beautiful? That’s a fine ship.”

Mal was still looking tense, “Yeah, a lotta fine ships here. Don’t go gettin’ friendly with strange ships Kaylee. We are here to do a job, not sight see.”

“Where is our contact supposed to meet us captain,” Zoe asked softly.

“Well if Inara’s man is who he claims to be,” Malcolm said plainly, “he is supposed to contact us when we dock. Any messages yet Wash?”

“Nothing but our dock number. They sure are not asking a lot of questions for a secure corporate facility. Apparently this job is for real,” Wash said.

Jayne frowned, “Whuddya mean. Course it’s for real. We got fifty-thousand in coin in our pockets already. This could be a big payoff Mal.”

“Yeah,” Malcolm said looking ahead through the window, “or a big bust. Did anyone notice how many particle canons this place has? Make me nervous bein’ on the wrong end of any gun.”

“We’re being hailed captain,” Wash stated.

“Let’s hear it,” Mal said dryly.

The com came on with its thin sound, “Serenity, this is Acre control. Please relinquish control and we will guide you in. Navigation sync in three, two, one, mark.”

Wash tapped a s

Comments
Wednesday, 21 July 2004 01:02
Will you please listen! Dividers are Good. They help prevent confusion when you have a scene change. Stick in dividers when you have a scene change, even if it's just a row of asterisks.
SAGE1066
Wednesday, 21 July 2004 03:07
For future reference Duck: I will NEVER put in dividers. If you don't like this or cannot keep up... don't read.
SAGE1066
Wednesday, 21 July 2004 03:12
Sorry to have left out a chapter when I posted last. CH2 A Job and CH3: Hot Showers are now in order.
Wednesday, 21 July 2004 17:29
So like Mal and Inara, always looking like they're going to get together until one drives off the other. Surprised Mal would let Serenity be cleaned-up. The change in appearance might scare-off his usual clientele.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 21 July 2004 18:15
Enjoying the story quite a bit, though would agree with sitting duck - some sort of divider would be nice. Thank you for sharing your creativity. Susan

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