Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

The Gift: Act II

Saturday, February 17, 2007

Several years post-BDM. Story of new crew, of visiting relatives and of ponies. Feedback would be great!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3108    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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note: the book seph n dan are readin in this act is 'wuthering heights' by emily brontë. you should read it! not because you have to to understand this, but because it's the best! also, i'm sorry if the first act was confusin (also if it was confusin that it was the first of more acts). hopefully things become more clear in this one =D

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“I wasn’t impressed.”

“Hu?” Daniel didn’t look up from his book.

“By his take-off. I wasn’t impressed.” Sephora was absent-mindedly flicking her knife. “I could have done better, doncha think? Li-wu?”

Daniel gave up and put his book down, slightly exasperated. “It was nothing extraordinary, but what do you expect, it’s just a take-off!”

“River would-“ Sephora paused, plagued by sudden pain. “You didn’t feel a jolt,” she finally muttered.

“Yes, well, River was River.” Oddly this seemed justification enough. “This guy is a bit odd, but we must have just got off to a bad start, do you not think?”

Sephora shrugged. “I dunno. Somethin about him just bothers me.”

“Maybe-” Daniel closed his mouth sharply as his Father stepped into the mess with the new pilot in tow.

“Well, Zuriel, I think that’s about it.” The Captain spotted Sephora and Daniel lurking in the corner. “How about you guys get to know each other?” Mal was conscious that their latest crewmember was worryingly closer to the children’s age than his own.

“Actually, I was gonna go do some weights before bed,” Sephora jumped to her feet. “Li-wu, wanna spot me?”

Daniel caught his Father’s stern eye and decided it was defiantly best to stay. “Maybe in a bit, Seph.”

Li-wu,” she hissed.

“If you want to go, that’s fine,” Zuriel put in, his tone touching on resentful.

“No, I was going to have a drink. Would you like something?”

Sephoria flounced off before the new pilot could reply.

“I’ll leave you two then… I’ve got… Captain-type things to be doin…” Mal said, slipping out.

“I’d love a cup of tea.” Zuriel sat.

“Urm… We have coffee,” Daniel offered.

“That’d

Comments
Saturday, 17 February 2007 18:08
Ummm...are River and Jayne dead?!?!? Oh, please don't let that be the case. I would be a bit gutted.

Interesting little bit of information on Zuriel though, I have theories about him but again, speculation. I don't know whether he's really likeable yet or not, he seems a bit indifferent to me. I think it's because he's so new, I'm sure that'll change as the story goes on!

Looking forward to the next bit :-)
Saturday, 17 February 2007 21:56
=D i like your speculations wynter! imagine me sitting stroking a cat or something sayin "mwah ha ha! little do they know!!" obviously i'm not acutally doin that, but in my mind...

anyhow thanks for your encouragment!

n the debious nature of zuriel is intentional. he is a bit odd n personally i find him a bit depressin... but will the crew warm to him? n will he want them to??

find out next time in 'the gift' *dramatic music*
Tuesday, 20 February 2007 20:59
Hmm...interesting things are afoot around the good ship Serenity, eh Sofi?

;)

Gotta say I am kinda unsure about how I feel about Daniel and Sephora. They seem great together...but the knowledge they are Mal's son and Zoe's daughter seems...offputting for some reason. Like they're making up for Mal and Zoe not hooking up with one another:(

Still...I really loved what you did here, especially with Sephora trying to harness Rose's natural cutness to get a pony;D

BEB

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